英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.S

英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.S
英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）
There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.She goes to her classroom and turns off the windows.She is really tired but she is very happy.

英语作文评析,正文如下（七年级水平）There is a big wind blows in a spring night,at a small city.At 2 o’clock,Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off.She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school.S
第二句中的时间最好不要,用在这里有点多余,而且,这个时间用在这里,一般后面是要接现在进行时的.要是要表现时间的话,最好不用具体的时间点,可以用其他的来表示.如果要用,因该是凌晨吧,就要加上in the morning
第二句中,turn off一般表示关电器之类,关窗户用close windows,在这里用形容词形式表示状态,可以用the classroom’s windows aren't closed（教室的窗户没有关）,也可以用the classroom’s windows are open（教室的窗户开着）
如果有第一句话,就表示讲故事,建议最好用过去式,

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七年级，还没学过去式吧。学了，建议最好用过去式。没学，就照旧。
There is a big wind blows in a spring night at a small city--------There is a big wind blows on a night of spring at a small city.
Xiao Hong suddenly th...

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你好
七年级，还没学过去式吧。学了，建议最好用过去式。没学，就照旧。
There is a big wind blows in a spring night at a small city--------There is a big wind blows on a night of spring at a small city.
Xiao Hong suddenly thinks the classroom’s windows isn’t turn off. ---------Xiao Hong suddenly realizes the classroom’s windows aren't closed。意识到没有关窗户。
She wears her dress quickly and runs into her school-------She put on hers clothes quickly and runs into her school.
and turns off the windows.------and closes the windows。
总的来说还可以，有点小问题。用过去时显得会更合理。

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There was a big wind -blows on a spring night in a small city. At 2 o’clock, Xiao Hong suddenly remembered(记得） the classroom’s windows not to turn off. She wore her dress quickly and ran into her school. She went to her classroom and turns off the windows. She was really tired but she was very happy.

前面一句和后文没什么联系吧。就刮风有些联系。