改错10处：Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.接上You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be visit my uncle that day.He is going to Canada to make his PhD,and will leav

改错10处：Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.接上You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be visit my uncle that day.He is going to Canada to make his PhD,and will leav
改错10处：Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.
接上You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be visit my uncle that day.He is going to Canada to make his PhD,and will leave China this Sunday.I think I should say good-bye for him.I'd really like to go to the concert.I knew the performances will stay until next weekend,so how do you think about going next Friday evening?Please let me know that we can go together then.Give me a phone at 12300456.
Thanks.Li Hua.

改错10处：Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.接上You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be visit my uncle that day.He is going to Canada to make his PhD,and will leav
since改为when
but>because
go>would go
去掉be
leave>leave for
for>to
knew>know
how>what
phone>phone call

You suggested that we go to ( the )concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will ( ) visit my uncle ( on ) that day.He is going to Canada to ( get ) his PhD,and will leave China this Sunday.I thi...

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You suggested that we go to ( the )concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will ( ) visit my uncle ( on ) that day.He is going to Canada to ( get ) his PhD,and will leave China this Sunday.I think I should say good-bye( to )him.I'd really like to go to the concert.I ( know ) the performances will ( go on ) until next weekend,so ( )how about ( ) next Friday evening?Please let me know( if )we can go together then.Give me a phone ( call )at 12300456.

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Dear Bob,I saw(改成read) your note yesterday afternoon since(改成when) I came back from school. You suggested that we go to (添加the) concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be(去be) visit my uncle ...

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Dear Bob,I saw(改成read) your note yesterday afternoon since(改成when) I came back from school. You suggested that we go to (添加the) concert this Friday evening.I'm sorry but I will be(去be) visit my uncle that day.He is going to Canada to make(改成study for) his PhD,and will leave China this Sunday.I think I should say good-bye for(改成to) him.I'd really like to go to the concert.I knew (改成know)the performances will stay until next weekend,so how(改成what) do you think about going next Friday evening?Please let me know that(改成if/whether) we can go together then.Give me a phone at(改成on) 12300456.

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第一句：since---when
第三句：but---that be visit---visit
第四句：make---work
第五句：for---to
第六句：the concert----concert
第七句：knew---know until---till
第八句：how---what
第九句：that---whether

1.第一句Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.
since改成when，since引导完成时；
2.第二句You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.
语法正确，是虚拟语气，但是conc...

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1.第一句Dear Bob,I saw your note yesterday afternoon since I came back from school.
since改成when，since引导完成时；
2.第二句You suggested that we go to concert this Friday evening.
语法正确，是虚拟语气，但是concert前应加the；
3.第三句I'm sorry but I will be visit my uncle that day.
will be 的be动词去掉，因为visit是动词；
4.第四句He is going to Canada to make his PhD
make有问题，make一般是制造之意，这里应该是攻读博士学位，可填study for；
5.第五句I think I should say good-bye for him.
for改成to,to是具有方向的介词
6.第七句I knew the performances will stay until next weekend，
knew改成know

7.第七句so how do you think about going next Friday evening
going后应加there，宾语不可少
8.第八句：Please let me know that we can go together then.
that应改为whether或者if
其余两处没有找到，如果还有的话就是书信形式，开头和结尾，Dear bob后令起一行，thanks后另起一行。
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