帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost can’t stand on my own feet.I took every step carefully but hard to conctral my balance.Then,I met a friend who have already fell o

帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost can’t stand on my own feet.I took every step carefully but hard to conctral my balance.Then,I met a friend who have already fell o
帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激
This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost can’t stand on my own feet.I took every step carefully but hard to conctral my balance.
Then,I met a friend who have already fell over herself several times,but when we walked arm in arm,magic happened,we felt as if the ice under our feet is no longer slippery.
That is 1 plus 1,and the result is obviously much more than two!
Well,it is ture that two individuals are equal two,but one plus one is more than two.Why?It has an plus sign between them,and the sign means combination,cooperation,communication and connection.
When a man meets the right woman,for example,does their combination just mean two persons?No,it means a family,and a family means generations of people,means endless love and responsibility.Forthermore,it might mean a historical family business,like Jiachen Li’s,Rockefeller’s,and Hilton’s.
One plus one,it creates something new and so big!
In business,if two exellent office clerks do the same thing separetly,they can do it well,but they may almost repeat each other’s work.But if they cooperate,they can not only do it in less time,but also bring out a better result.
One plus one can reparates each other’s disadvantages while expands strongpoints.Isn’t that much more than two?
In history,one create or find something new,maybe the relationship between the circle of the moon and tides,or the skill of survive in an earthquake,and another one practice it,better it,pass it on—and that is the base of cultural continuity and human civilization improvement.
1 plus 1 can extend something that was so dim within individual,and achieve something that single persons—no matter how many,can’t do on their own.It even creates something that doesn’t exist when two persons were seperated.
.Next time,if anyone ask me how to avoid tumbling in such extreme weather,I will tell them—go with a friend!Because 1 plus 1 is more than

帮忙修改一篇350字英语文章 万分感激This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost can’t stand on my own feet.I took every step carefully but hard to conctral my balance.Then,I met a friend who have already fell o
This morning when I came here,the road was so slithery that I almost could not stand steady.I took every step carefully but hardly to keep my balance.
But after I met a friend who though had fell over several times,the magic happened.We held our arms across arms,and we felt that the slippery ice under our feet is no longer naughty.
That is one plus one.Absolutely,the combineded strength is much more than that of the two individuals itself!
Well,it is certain that one and one are equal two mathematically.Yet one plus one is more than two in our life.Why?It has an plus sign between them,and the sign does not only means combination,but the cooperation,communication and connection.
When true lovers meet,for example,does their combination just mean two simple person?No,it means a family,and a family means generations of people,means endless love and responsibility.Furthermore,it could mean a historical family business,like Jiachen Li's,Rockefeller's,and Hilton's.
One plus one is so wonderful and has created so many that one can never reach such.
Also in business,if two excellent office clerks do the same thing separately,they can do it well,but they may almost repeat each other’s work.But how about they decided to cooperate?They can bring out far from that one can bring out.
As a result,one plus one could avoid each other's disadvantages while enhances the working efficiency.
Dating back,after one creating or finding something new,say,the relationship between the lunar orbit and tides,or the tips of surviving in an earthquake,another person would test them,modify them,and agree with them—that should be the base of cultural continuity and human civilization improvement.
One plus one can extend something that was so dim within individual,and achieve something that simple persons—no matter how many,can’t do on their own.It even creates something that doesn’t exist when two persons were separated.
If anyone would ask me how to get rid of tumbling in such extreme weather next time,I would tell them:with your friend.Because of one plus one is far from two!
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This morning when I came here, the road was so slithery that I almost couldn’t stand on my own feet. I took every step carefully but hardly to control my balance.
Then, I met a friend who had alr...

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This morning when I came here, the road was so slithery that I almost couldn’t stand on my own feet. I took every step carefully but hardly to control my balance.
Then, I met a friend who had already felt over several times, but when we walked arm in arm, strangely, we felt as if the ice under our feet was no longer slippery.
That is 1 plus 1, the result of which is obviously more than two!
Well, it is ture that two individuals are equal two, but one plus one is more than two. Why? It has a plus sign between them, which means combination, cooperation, communication and connection.
When a man meets the right woman, for example, does their combination just mean two persons? No, it means a family, and a family means generations of people, means endless love and responsibility. Furthermore, it might mean a historical family business, like Jiacheng Li’s,Rockefeller’s, and Hilton’s.
One plus one, it creates something new and so big!
In business, if two exellent office clerks do the same thing separately, they can do it well, but they may almost repeat each other’s work. But if they cooperate, they can not only do it in less time, but also bring out a better result.
One plus one can avoid each other’s disadvantages while expanding the strongpoints. Isn’t that much more than two?
In history, one created or found something new, maybe the relationship between the circle of the moon and tides, or the skill of surviving an earthquake, and another one practised it, bettered it, passed it on—and that is the base of cultural continuity and human civilization improvement.
1 plus 1 can extend something that was so dim within individuals, and achieve something that single person—no matter how many, can’t do by oneself. It even creates something that doesn’t exist when two persons were separated.
. Next time, if anyone asks me how to avoid tumbling in such extreme weather, I will tell him—go with a friend! Because 1 plus 1 is more than 2!

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