英文语法改错.给50分1）it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or m

英文语法改错.给50分1）it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or m
英文语法改错.给50分
1）it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.
Dicuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nature versus nurture is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to explain which is more important in deciding one’s levels of ability in,for example,sport,art or music.
Natural talent is play pivotal role in promoting one’s success.It is what differentiates successed person form those who is always practing hard but without innate talent.Many celebrities can be show to manifest the importance of inborned talent.For example,ZhouZhou,who is born with mental handicap,shows great talent in musical era.
However,it is doesnot mean that nurture is not important.Othwise,the education system,which is aim to guide and inform students will not has chance to exist.There is a prevalent belief that students can improve their abilities and skills via hard-working practice and proper training methods.
From my perspective,both of them are not mutually exclusive.On one hand,if without natural talent,one will not climbs the highest level of ablility in almost every area,now matter how good the teacher and how frequently he or she practies.On the other hand,without persistent practing and guiding,although a child is genius,he or she will eventually lose this advantage and lag behind other children.
As dicussed above,a person’s success can be contributed to neither innate talent nor nurture by teachers,but to synthesis them together.

英文语法改错.给50分1）it is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents,for instance for sport or music,and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or m
第四行 Discuss
第七行 It is what differentiates successed person form those who is always practing hard but without innate talent
改:It is the differentiation between the successful person and whose who are always practing hard but without innate talent
第十行 ZhouZhou,who is born with mental handicap,shows great talent in musical era
改:musical field
第十一行 However,it is doesnot mean that nurture is not important.Othwise
it doesnot mean that nurture is not important.otherwise,
第十二行 which is aim to guide and inform students will not has chance to exist.
which is aimming to guide and inform those students who never have a chance to exist.这句话你想表达的意思我没那准,等会可以问我
倒数第二段 第二行 one will not climbs the highest level of ablility in almost every area,
改：one will not climb to the highest level of ablility in almost every area,
同上接下去 now matter how good the teacher and how frequently he or she practies
改：no matter how
倒数第四行 although a child is genius
though the child is a genius
倒数第三行 lag behind other children.
fall behind with other children.
倒数第二行 As dicussed above
Abovediscussed
倒数第一行 but to synthesis them together
改：but to synthesize them together

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