英语短文改错 dear li hua ,i'm glad to know that you have accustomed to the life in germany.i alsohave something interesting to tell you .singapore is recognized as one of a best tourism cities .last week i went there with my families .after our

英语短文改错 dear li hua ,i'm glad to know that you have accustomed to the life in germany.i alsohave something interesting to tell you .singapore is recognized as one of a best tourism cities .last week i went there with my families .after our
英语短文改错 dear li hua ,i'm glad to know that you have accustomed to the life in germany.i also
have something interesting to tell you .singapore is recognized as one of a best tourism cities .last week i went there with my families .after our arrival at there at there ,the guide led us to a large apartment ,which we lived with some africa and spanish visitors .as you know ,the official language of singapore in english ,for many local people speak chinese .i found no trouble communicate with the local people there ,because i can speak english fluent ,but i don't like the way of their communicating with strangers .even a taxi driver prefer to order you instead of making a request when they want you to do something .

英语短文改错 dear li hua ,i'm glad to know that you have accustomed to the life in germany.i alsohave something interesting to tell you .singapore is recognized as one of a best tourism cities .last week i went there with my families .after our
have been(加) accustomed to …
tell→share with
a best→the best
after our arrival at there→upon our arrival there
which we lived →where we lived或者in which we lived
africa and spanish→african and spanish
in English→is English
for →while
found →had (中式英语)
communicate →communicating
fluent →fluently
of their communicating →of their communication (有专有名词即不用动名词)
prefer→prefers
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After we arrived at there
The offical laungage of Singapore is English, but many local people speak Chinese.
你的意思是要说 许多当地人都说华语 对吗?
Speak english fluently

好长，明显的中式英文。

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Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to know that you have (加入been)accustomed to the life in Germany. I also have something interesting to tell you. Singapore is recognized as...

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Dear Li Hua,
I'm glad to know that you have (加入been)accustomed to the life in Germany. I also have something interesting to tell you. Singapore is recognized as one of (a改成the) best tourism cities. Last week I went there with my (families改成family). After our arrival (去掉at) there, the guide led us to a large apartment, (which改成where) we lived with some (Africa改成 African) and Spanish visitors. As you know, the official language of Singapore is English, (for改成but) many local people speak Chinese. I found no trouble (communicate改成communicating) with the local people there, because I can speak English (fluent改成fluently), but I don't like the way of their communicating with strangers. Even a taxi driver (prefer改成prefers) to order you instead of making a request when they want you to do something.


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have been accustomed to
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第二行：arrival 后面的at去掉；families改成family
第三行：which改成where；africa改成african
第四行：in改成is，这里应该是你书写错误吧，一般不会有这种改错的。
for改错while
第五行：commun...

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have been accustomed to
第一行：a改成the
第二行：arrival 后面的at去掉；families改成family
第三行：which改成where；africa改成african
第四行：in改成is，这里应该是你书写错误吧，一般不会有这种改错的。
for改错while
第五行：communicate改成communicating
第六行：fluent改成fluently
第七行：prefer改成prefers

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