英语语法 Please allow me to introduce myself for you 检查Please allow me to introduce myself for you.My name is xx,my 20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview.Now I will briefly in

英语语法 Please allow me to introduce myself for you 检查Please allow me to introduce myself for you.My name is xx,my 20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview.Now I will briefly in
英语语法 Please allow me to introduce myself for you 检查
Please allow me to introduce myself for you.My name is xx,my 20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview.Now I will briefly introduce themselves.I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools.My specialty is computer software applications.In the past year I have the basic expertise.I like reading books,watching movies,listening to music,and so on.I think I am an honest and optimistic,can also work under great pressure.This is probably,thank you.

英语语法 Please allow me to introduce myself for you 检查Please allow me to introduce myself for you.My name is xx,my 20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.Very honored to have this opportunity to come here to interview.Now I will briefly in
Please let me introduce myself.My name is xx,20-year-old,was born in Qinghai Province.i'm very honored to have this opportunity to come here .Now I will briefly introduce the details.I graduated from the Qinghai first vocational schools.My specialty is computer software applications.In the past years I had the basic expertise.I like reading books,watching movies,listening music,and so on.I think I am an honest and optimistic,and also work under the pressure.This is all,thank you.

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my 20-year-old 改为I'm 20 years old and I was born...
下面句可以改为It's pleasure to have this opportunnity to come here for interview.
Now I will briefly introduce themselves??这句是干吗的？去掉吧。把It's pleasu...

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my 20-year-old 改为I'm 20 years old and I was born...
下面句可以改为It's pleasure to have this opportunnity to come here for interview.
Now I will briefly introduce themselves??这句是干吗的？去掉吧。把It's pleasure 放开头 然后“请允许我介绍”放第二句。
In the past years I learned the basic expertise.In my spare time,I ....and so on.
I am an honest and optimistic guy who is a suffering and patience worker.
Thank you for your attention.That's all.

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第一句的用法有点问题，一般向某人介绍谁，是用 introduce to，而不是for。
my 20-year-old，was born in Qinghai province，改为：20 years old， and come from Qinghai province.
专业用 major而不是 specialty。
语法和词汇问题有点多。。。。。