英语短文改错有10个错误帮忙!This is my first time to write an English e- mail.I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment,After the school,I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues.I like ever

英语短文改错有10个错误帮忙!This is my first time to write an English e- mail.I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment,After the school,I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues.I like ever
英语短文改错有10个错误帮忙!
This is my first time to write an English e- mail.I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment,After the school,I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues.I like every editor in you magazine,Learning with them always make me happy.Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine.So I will also buy your magazine,read two magazines at the same time.I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.
Best wish to all of you.
有10个错...快来!

英语短文改错有10个错误帮忙!This is my first time to write an English e- mail.I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment,After the school,I ran to but it.So far I bought two issues.I like ever
two months before---two months ago
After the school --- After school (放学以后）
I bought --- I have bought （so far常与现在完成时连用）
make me --- makes me （单个动名词短语作主语,谓语用单数）
challenge me --- challege myself
So I will also--- But I will also
read two --- reading two （一个句子中不能出现两个谓语）
meaningful --- meaningfully（修饰动词短语get through应该用副词）
Best wish --- Best wishes
上面这九个比较有把握,另一个一时找不出来了.
* 有几个拼写错误,估计是你的手误吧?短文改错一般不出拼写错误：
the firest(first) moment
I ran to but (buy) it.
help me ger (get)

maganize-magazine
before-ago
firest -first
After the school中the去掉
but-buy
make-makes
challenge me 中Me去掉
read 前面加个and
ger through - spend
meanful-meaningful

firest----first;
me-----myself

before-ago, firest-first, after the school 的the 去掉，but 改成buy,bought 前面加have，learning with的with 改成from， make改成makes,me改成myself，read two magazine 前面加and, ger-get, meanful改成meaningful。

1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school ...

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1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school I ran to but it
删除the，but→buy.................
4、So far I bought two issues................
bought→has bought
5、 I like every editor in you magazine
in→of
6、Learning with them always make me happy
make→makes
7、Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine
me →myself

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1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school ...

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1、This is my first time to write an English e- mail.
is→was
2、I came across your maganize about two months before and I loved it from the firest moment。
before→ago
3、After the school I ran to but it
删除the，but→buy
4、So far I bought two issues
bought→has bought
5、 I like every editor in you magazine
in→of
6、Learning with them always make me happy
make→makes
7、Next month I will challenge me to read an advanced magazine
me →myself
8、So I will also buy your magazine, read two magazines at the same time
read→reading
9、I think this will help me ger through my spare time meanful.
meanful→meaningful
10、Best wish to all of you.
wish→wishes

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