给我点评一下这篇作文,要像老师一样的点评呀我们要交的人生需要掌声.人生,就像开放在郊外的野花,万紫千红,芳香四滥.人生的掌声犹如阳光雨露,滋润着每一叶花瓣.恩赐是一片照射在冬日
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![给我点评一下这篇作文,要像老师一样的点评呀我们要交的人生需要掌声.人生,就像开放在郊外的野花,万紫千红,芳香四滥.人生的掌声犹如阳光雨露,滋润着每一叶花瓣.恩赐是一片照射在冬日](/uploads/image/z/7717222-46-2.jpg?t=%E7%BB%99%E6%88%91%E7%82%B9%E8%AF%84%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%2C%E8%A6%81%E5%83%8F%E8%80%81%E5%B8%88%E4%B8%80%E6%A0%B7%E7%9A%84%E7%82%B9%E8%AF%84%E5%91%80%E6%88%91%E4%BB%AC%E8%A6%81%E4%BA%A4%E7%9A%84%E4%BA%BA%E7%94%9F%E9%9C%80%E8%A6%81%E6%8E%8C%E5%A3%B0.%E4%BA%BA%E7%94%9F%2C%E5%B0%B1%E5%83%8F%E5%BC%80%E6%94%BE%E5%9C%A8%E9%83%8A%E5%A4%96%E7%9A%84%E9%87%8E%E8%8A%B1%2C%E4%B8%87%E7%B4%AB%E5%8D%83%E7%BA%A2%2C%E8%8A%B3%E9%A6%99%E5%9B%9B%E6%BB%A5.%E4%BA%BA%E7%94%9F%E7%9A%84%E6%8E%8C%E5%A3%B0%E7%8A%B9%E5%A6%82%E9%98%B3%E5%85%89%E9%9B%A8%E9%9C%B2%2C%E6%BB%8B%E6%B6%A6%E7%9D%80%E6%AF%8F%E4%B8%80%E5%8F%B6%E8%8A%B1%E7%93%A3.%E6%81%A9%E8%B5%90%E6%98%AF%E4%B8%80%E7%89%87%E7%85%A7%E5%B0%84%E5%9C%A8%E5%86%AC%E6%97%A5)
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