Last weekend,we plan to go on an outingLast weekend,we plan to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got here early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached to the lake,we found that a nice bag lie on the gro

Last weekend,we plan to go on an outingLast weekend,we plan to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got here early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached to the lake,we found that a nice bag lie on the gro
Last weekend,we plan to go on an outing
Last weekend,we plan to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got here early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached to the lake,we found that a nice bag lie on the ground.There was a camera,a business card and a lot money in them.Then we called the owner of the bag,which voice sounded like an old man's.One and a half hour later,he came to us.Seen his bag,he was very happy.We didn't row boats on the lake,and we were very happy to help someone.

Last weekend,we plan to go on an outingLast weekend,we plan to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got here early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached to the lake,we found that a nice bag lie on the gro
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Last weekend,we had an outing to the Xihu Park.We started early in the morning so that we could have plenty of time to row boats in the lake.But as soon as we got there,we found that a nice bag lying on the ground,in it was a camera,a business card and a lot of money.Then we phoned the owner of the bag according to the information on the card.It turned out that the owner was an old man.One and a half hour later,he came to us.On seeing his bag,he was very happy and said thanks to us warmly.That day we did not row boats in the lake,but we felt happy for we lent a helping hand to others.

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Last weekend,we planed to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got there early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached the lake,we found that a...

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Last weekend,we planed to go on an outing to the Xihu Park.We got there early in the morning so that we could row boats on the Xihu Lake.But as soon as we reached the lake,we found that a nice bag lay on the ground.There were a camera,a business card and a lot of money in it.Then we called the owner of the bag, whose voice sounded like an old man's. One and a half hour later, he came to us. Seen his bag, he was very happy.We didn't row boats on the lake, but we were very happy to help someone.

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