求高手看看这段文字有没有错误Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.This speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream is like this.There were flowers and

求高手看看这段文字有没有错误Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.This speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream is like this.There were flowers and
求高手看看这段文字有没有错误
Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.This speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream is like this.There were flowers and grass every where.The sky is blue and the air is very fresh.But it is only a dream.Everybody here knows the truth.You know the ozone hole at the top of the South Pole.We can’t do anything without it.And you know the temperature of the earth is rising.Can’t we do anything?No,we can.We can start to protect environment.If every student who is driven to school can take bus or ride bicycle to school once a week,we can make the earth healthier.My dream will come true.The world is beautiful; the world is full of love.That’s all my speech thank you!
Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.My speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream was like this.There were flowers and grass every where.The sky was blue and the air was very fresh.But it was only a dream.Everybody here knows the truth.You know the ozone hole at the top of the South Pole.We can’t do anything without it.And you know the temperature of the earth is rising.Many scientists have begun to improve it.We are not good at science and technology .We are not scientists.But can’t we do anything?No,we can.We can start to protect environment.If every student who is driven to school can take bus or ride bicycle to school once a week,tiny streams can combine into a vast ocean,small trees can together be an immense forest.We can make the earth healthier.My dream will come true.The world will be beautiful; the world will full of love.That’s all my speech thank you!

求高手看看这段文字有没有错误Hello,everybody.I begin my speech now.Now let’s get to the point.This speech is about “Love and the world”.I always dreamed when I was so young.The world in my dream is like this.There were flowers and
我勒个去
槽点满满啊
要一个个完善么?那样基本就要重写了好麻烦...
我太无聊了来帮你改.无视我吧= =
Hello, everybody. Today I would like to talk about “Love and the world”. I always dreamed when I was a little boy/girl. In my dream the world were full of flowers and beautiful plants. The sky was blue and the air was clean. But it was only a dream. Everybody here knows what actually happened in our world. We know there is an ozone hole at the top of the South Pole. but we can’t do anything about it(但是如果你是想说我们不能离开大气层的话可以说“We can’t live without it’s protection”).The temperature of the earth is rising as a result of the ozone hole. Many scientists have begun to improve it. We are not good at science and technology as them. But are we really can’t do anything? (这里和上面意思冲突了我不知道你想说什么)Yes, we can. We can start to protect our environment.
其实看看可以改的也很多但我觉得那样就更不像你本来写的了...
总之今天我要睡觉去了,可能过两天有空再帮你看看接下来的咯

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