Dear leaders:Hello!Thank you very much for taking the time to browse the application letter of the "ordinary people" .She comes from shijiazhuang,hebei province and is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes t

Dear leaders:Hello!Thank you very much for taking the time to browse the application letter of the "ordinary people" .She comes from shijiazhuang,hebei province and is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes t
Dear leaders:
Hello!Thank you very much for taking the time to browse the application letter of the "ordinary people" .
She comes from shijiazhuang,hebei province and is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes to work in shijiazhuang.
In the freshman year,she decided her later work goal:to be an accountant.And she worked hard for this goal for three years.
She knows that it is important for the company and herself to love her job,and only by keeping high enthusiasm in work can take work as a pleasure,and as a result she can finish her task more efficiently.
Although she didn't get the scholarship in school,she has enough ability to cope with the challenges,and the most important thing is that she pays great attention to this work,and has confidence to do this work well.Enterprise is the place where talented people are hired,rather than somebody who has a diploma only,so an excellent enterprise leader can make a prompt decision and not to stick to one pattern to hire an "ordinary people".Of course,these "ordinary people" are not really normal.
If,you can give the opportunity,then the candidate is very lucky,because she really meets a good leader.And she will turn the grateful mood into working energy,and harvest with her own hands to pay back to the company.

Dear leaders:Hello!Thank you very much for taking the time to browse the application letter of the "ordinary people" .She comes from shijiazhuang,hebei province and is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes t
To whom it may concern,
Hello!Thank you very much for taking time to browse this application letter.
She is about to graduate from Hebei Normal University of Science & Technology,and hopes to work in shijiazhuang,hebei province,of where she comes from.
She has planned her career goal,to be an accountant,when she was a freshman.In order to achieve this,she urged herself to work hard for the next 3 years.
"To love what you are doing" is something she always remember as an employee.It is also clear to her that only by keeping high enthusiasm can take her work as a pleasure,and as a result suprisingly-high efficiency may occur.
She is fully qualified to deal with challenges,and the most important thing is that she pays great attention to her job,and has confidence to do it well.Instead of hiring somebody who has a diploma only,companies are acutually hunting for talented employees.A wise HR team can make a all-aspect-considered decision instead of sticking to some set criteria to hire an "ordinary people".
She will be honered if you would give her an opportunity to be a member of your company.In return,you will see her harvest with her own hands to pay back to the company,with energy and a greatful heart.
已大致修改.
同时个人建议如果是求职信,把所有的she,改回I第一人称,因为求职信是以自己身份呈给HR,或者公司的.

个人小小建议：

1. 第三段 she decided her later work goal 建议改为 she set up her career goal

2. 如果我是人事主管，我看完后有种淡淡忧伤，好像我不请你的话我就不是一个好领导，有一些些威胁的感觉。不过外国人估计这种喜欢简单直接的。
   

求职信么？为什么不用第一人称？
不要说自己是ordinary people，给招聘者感觉你不够自信。
不用说自己在大一时就有想做一名会计师的理想，因为那是你自己的生活。招聘者更关心你现在会做什么，
奖学金的事情就不用提了，其实对招聘者来说，没拿到过也没什么大不了的，他不问你就别说。
还有，不用你教育领导者应该怎么做。

总之，客观，实事求是就好，毕...

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求职信么？为什么不用第一人称？
不要说自己是ordinary people，给招聘者感觉你不够自信。
不用说自己在大一时就有想做一名会计师的理想，因为那是你自己的生活。招聘者更关心你现在会做什么，
奖学金的事情就不用提了，其实对招聘者来说，没拿到过也没什么大不了的，他不问你就别说。
还有，不用你教育领导者应该怎么做。

总之，客观，实事求是就好，毕竟是求职，不是跟朋友谈心。

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very nice