Dear John,I go to a new middle school in Wenzhou now .I like it very much.I’m making a lot of friends.I’m studying new subjects,such as Chinese,math,English and science.I think Chinese is very interesting,and I am good at it.I like it because it
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Dear John,I go to a new middle school in Wenzhou now .I like it very much.I’m making a lot of friends.I’m studying new subjects,such as Chinese,math,English and science.I think Chinese is very interesting,and I am good at it.I like it because it
Dear John,
I go to a new middle school in Wenzhou now .I like it very much.I’m making a lot of friends.
I’m studying new subjects,such as Chinese,math,English and science.I think Chinese is very interesting,and I am good at it.I like it because it’s only about 2 homework.We’re talking somethings and learning how to read a passage,they’re help us a life.
We have science everyday.Sometimes we‘re go to the laboratory,and we usually stay at classroom and listen to our science teacher —Miss Zhang.I think she is smart and beautiful.
You can see,I‘m enjoying my new school!
So what about you,John?Can you write and tell me what you’re doing in your school in England?
Terry
Dear John,I go to a new middle school in Wenzhou now .I like it very much.I’m making a lot of friends.I’m studying new subjects,such as Chinese,math,English and science.I think Chinese is very interesting,and I am good at it.I like it because it
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把下面这两处改改就好:
We’re talking somethings and learning how to read a passage,they’re help us a life.—— We’re talking about and learning how to read a passage.It helps us a lot.
we usually stay at classroom —— we usually stay in the classroom
1,homework不可数,不可用数词,可以用a little 2,talking about讨论某事talk为不及物动词 3,something或some things注意区分连一起与不连一起的区别,肯定是不存在somethings 4,they're help us alife前面的逗号不能连着两个完整的句子,最简单方法改为句号,即英语中的点号.。而且“终身受益”的说法也不恰当,整个可改为Th...
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1,homework不可数,不可用数词,可以用a little 2,talking about讨论某事talk为不及物动词 3,something或some things注意区分连一起与不连一起的区别,肯定是不存在somethings 4,they're help us alife前面的逗号不能连着两个完整的句子,最简单方法改为句号,即英语中的点号.。而且“终身受益”的说法也不恰当,整个可改为They're helpful for our whole life. 5.stay in classroom 6.write to me and tell me what's going with you in your school inEngland
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