我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.Thomas TsaiI am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student to get the best choice every day.It was because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful fo

我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.Thomas TsaiI am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student to get the best choice every day.It was because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful fo
我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.
Thomas Tsai
I am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student to get the best choice every day.It was because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful for their future.Thomas Tsai is in which students I am saying.Thomas Tsai is a first year student in college,maybe this is the reason Thomas don’t know how to choose the course.Thomas Tsai has a heavy course in this semester and he plan to transfer to Coast State University after two years,it means Thomas Tsai need to get the good grade after two years and get the enough credit.But Thomas Tsai is busy,Thomas Tsai need to works ten to fifteen hours per week to help his family at their family-owned book and stationery store.Thomas Tsai is his parents’ only child and his help is important to keeping the store in business.I think this is the one reason Thomas Tsai choose majoring in business accounting.But I still to know if Thomas Tsai keep to going all course he choose,it would get the bad grade in some course.I know the first year students always want to take all course they want to take and they never think it’s work or not.Thomas Tsai is taking five classes:Introduction to Accounting,Chinese Immigration to California,Intermediate Math,Study Skill and Introduction to Reading and Writing.It is too heavy for Thomas Tsai.The propose I want to give Thomas Tsai is he need to drop a class.I know Thomas Tsai’s high school grades were not the best.Thomas Tsai have many class is get a D or C in high school grades.I think Thomas Tsai is not really understanding how to study,So,I don’t think Thomas Tsai can take five classes at the same time.The problem for know is what class Thomas Tsai should drop?
I think Thomas Tsai should drop Chinese Immigration to California,because this class is not required to graduate for college.This is a good class and teacher is very patient and encouraging too.Thomas Tsai has a friend take this class before and he friend think this class is help her doing better in all of her college class.And this class will be credit to count to require graduating.Thomas Tsai thinks this class is interesting for he and he think is helping him to learn a lot.However,there are many drawbacks to the class as well.Thomas don’t really need this class for graduates and this is a special class,Thomas is afraid that it might not be offered again for many years.In addition,I know Thomas Tsai taking cultural study-China in high school and get the best grade.I think that is enough for Thomas Tsai.Mr.Wu grades very strictly not to mention.If Thomas Tsai wants to transfer after two years,he can’t make any bad grades in these two years.So,I don’t think Thomas Tsai should keep this class,I think Thomas Tsai need to drop Chinese Immigration to California.

我需要别人帮我修改英文作文中的语法.Thomas TsaiI am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student to get the best choice every day.It was because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful fo
Thomas Tsai
I am the advisor at Coast Community College.I need to help my student get the best choice every day,because some students don’t know how to choose the course really helpful in their future.Thomas Tsai is one of those students I refer to.Thomas Tsai is a first year student in college,so maybe this is the reason why Thomas don’t know how to choose the courses.Thomas Tsai has so many courses in this semester and he plans to transfer to Coast State University after two years,so it means Thomas Tsai needs to get good grade and get the enough credit after two years.But Thomas Tsai is so busy that Thomas Tsai need to works ten to fifteen hours per week to help his family with their family-owned book and stationery store.Thomas Tsai is his parents’ only child and his help is important to keep the store in business.I think this is the one reason why Thomas Tsai chooses the major of business accounting.But I still know if Thomas Tsai doesn’t keep going on all courses he chooses,it would get the bad grade in some course.I know the first year students always want to take all courses they want and they never think whether it works or not.Thomas Tsai is taking five courses:Introduction to Accounting,Chinese Immigration to California,Intermediate Math,Study Skill and Introduction to Reading and Writing.It is too heavy for Thomas Tsai.The suggestion I want to give Thomas Tsai is that he needs to drop a course.I know Thomas Tsai’s high school grades are not the best.Thoma Tsai gets Ds or Cs of high school grades on many courses.
I think Thomas Tsai is not really understanding how to study,So,I don’t think Thomas Tsai can take five classes at the same time.The problem now is which course Thomas Tsai should drop?
I think Thomas Tsai should drop Chinese Immigration to California,because this class is not required to graduate from college.a good class and teacher are very patient and encouraging too.Thomas Tsai has a friend who has taken this class before and his friend thinks this class can help her doing better on all of her college courses.And this class will be credit to count to require graduating.Thomas Tsai thinks this class is interesting for him and he thinks it is helpful for him to learn a lot.However,there are many drawbacks to the class as well.Thomas don’t really need this class for graduates and this is a special class,and Thomas is afraid that it might not be offered again for many years.In addition,I know Thomas Tsai taking cultural study-China in high school and get the best grade.I think that is enough for Thomas Tsai.Mr.Wu is very strict without questions.If Thomas Tsai wants to transfer after two years,he couldn’t get any bad grades in this two years.So,I don’t think Thomas Tsai should take this course,I think Thomas Tsai need to drop Chinese Immigration to California.
LZ这段话是不是机器翻译,修改起来错误太多,而且很多不通顺语句.我尽力修改了部分,但很多句子不能做大的变动,唯恐LZ无法辨别所更改的地方.如有问题,不吝赐教.

To whom it may concern.
Re: Thomas Tsai
I am the advisor(? What kind? Student Counseller or Academic Advisor) at Coast(? Are you sure it is not Coastal?) Community College.

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托马斯仔
我是在海岸社区学院顾问。我需要帮助我的学生得到最好的选择每天。这是因为一些学生不知道如何选择课程真正为他们的未来有帮助。托马斯仔是我的学生说。托马斯仔是一位在大学一年级的学生，也许这就是原因所在托马斯不知道如何选择课程。托马斯仔有一个学期在这沉重的课程，他计划在两年后到海岸州立大学，这意味着托马斯蔡需要获得两年后的好成绩，并获得足够的信贷。但托马斯蔡正忙，托马斯蔡需要工程10...

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托马斯仔
我是在海岸社区学院顾问。我需要帮助我的学生得到最好的选择每天。这是因为一些学生不知道如何选择课程真正为他们的未来有帮助。托马斯仔是我的学生说。托马斯仔是一位在大学一年级的学生，也许这就是原因所在托马斯不知道如何选择课程。托马斯仔有一个学期在这沉重的课程，他计划在两年后到海岸州立大学，这意味着托马斯蔡需要获得两年后的好成绩，并获得足够的信贷。但托马斯蔡正忙，托马斯蔡需要工程10至15小时，每周以帮助他们的家庭其家族拥有的书和文具商店。托马斯仔是他父母唯一的孩子，他的帮助是很重要的保持业务的商店。我认为这是原因之一托马斯仔选择主修会计业务。但是我仍然知道托马斯仔坚持全力当然他选择，它将获得过程中的一些不良等级。我知道，一年级学生总是希望所有的课程，他们希望借此，他们从来没有认为这是工作或没有。托马斯仔的时间超过5类：会计学概论，华人移民到加州，中级数学，学习技巧和介绍，以阅读和写作。它太沉重了托马斯仔。该建议我想给托马斯仔是他需要下降一类。我知道托马斯仔的高中成绩并不是最好的。托马斯仔有很多类是在高中的D级或C。我认为托马斯蔡没有真正理解如何学习，所以，我不认为托马斯仔可以在同一时间5个班。知道的问题是什么类托马斯仔应该放弃？

我认为托马斯蔡应放弃华人移民到加州，因为这个类不需要为大学毕业。这是一个很好类，老师很有耐心和鼓励了。托马斯仔有一个朋友在此之前，他一流的朋友认为这个课程是在帮助她做她的大专班好。这一类将被记入计算，要求毕业。托马斯蔡认为这个类是有趣，因为他和他认为这是帮助他学习很多东西。但是，也有到类中也有许多缺点。托马斯并不真正需要这种类毕业生，这是一个特殊的阶级，托马斯恐怕未必提供多年了。此外，我知道托马斯仔到文化研究在高中中国和获得的最佳成绩。我认为这是不够的托马斯仔。吴先生非常严格的等级更不用提。如果托马斯仔要两年后，他不能在这两年任何坏的成绩。所以，我不认为托马斯仔要保持这个类，我认为托马斯蔡需要下降华人移民到加州。

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