Dear Paul,It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different.When I was in junior 2,I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted.Now I am junior 3,I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pres

Dear Paul,It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different.When I was in junior 2,I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted.Now I am junior 3,I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pres
Dear Paul,
It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different.When I was in junior 2,I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted.Now I am junior 3,I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pressure from parents and teachers.I also had less homework before.Instead,there’s plenty of homework to do everyday and I don’t go to bed until 11:00 p.m.It causes that I nearly fall asleep in class the next day.I am not allowed to go to movies either,my mom told me it’s extremely necessary to concentrate on study,only study!I have no chance to think about something entertaining!How disgusting!It’s impossible for me to live normally under such a terrible condition,and then I communicated with Ms.Lee,my English teacher.She’s patient and said that this year is crucial for us in order to make life easier.Later I realized the importance and I am much optimistic now.She’s right,the boring score will decide which high school you should study in.What’s more,perhaps it will determine your job and your lifetime.In a word,there’s an old saying that “No pains,no gains”,I am going to study hard and I believe I will control my future.
Tom
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要求写回信来着,我英语不太好,
可能语法之类的有问题吗我也不知道,教教我怎么改吧,哈哈,我文笔很烂呢,有点随心所欲了.

Dear Paul,It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different.When I was in junior 2,I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted.Now I am junior 3,I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pres
Dear Paul,
It absolutely changed a lot this year that my life became much different. When I was in junior 2, I used to have so much free time that I was able to do whatever I wanted. Now I am junior 3, I almost can’t play anymore because of the big pressure from parents and teachers. I also had less homework before. Instead, there’s plenty of homework to do everyday and I don’t go to bed until 11:00 p.m. It causes that I nearly fall asleep in class the next day. I am not allowed to go to movies either, my mom told me it’s extremely necessary to concentrate on study, only study! I have no chance to think about something entertaining! How disgusting! It’s impossible for me to live normally under such a terrible condition, and then I communicated with Ms. Lee, my English teacher. She’s patient and said that this year is crucial for us in order to make life easier. Later I realized the importance and I am much optimistic now. She’s right, the boring score will decide which high school you should study in. What’s more, perhaps it will determine your job and your lifetime. In a word, there’s an old saying that “No pains, no gains”, I am going to study hard and I believe I will control my future.