初一英语三分钟演讲求润色及补充Hello everyboday :Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subje

初一英语三分钟演讲求润色及补充Hello everyboday :Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subje
初一英语三分钟演讲
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Hello everyboday :
Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.
My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subjet is maths and English .My favorite color is ocean green.
My favorite food is rice . like reading books and playing sports very much.So,I am healthy.
My dream is to be a writer. I sure my future no dream! I am sure that it will come true.
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初一英语三分钟演讲求润色及补充Hello everyboday :Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.My favorite subje
说说你喜欢的运动或者是你的生活习惯,日常爱好
也可以说说你的一些小缺点,请大家多多包涵之类的
至于楼下说的一点小错误 如果是演讲的话 单词写错了不要紧 会念就好

Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself 改为Today is honored with everybody here introducing myself.

I hope to make friends with you.改为 I hope to make friends with you guys。显得更亲切，...

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Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself 改为Today is honored with everybody here introducing myself.

I hope to make friends with you.改为 I hope to make friends with you guys。显得更亲切，英语口语化。

outging girl 应该为outgoing， 你拼写错了

My favorite subjet is maths and English .应该为复数，改为My favorite subjets are maths and English .

like reading books and playing sports very much 改为I really like 。。。。

I sure my future no dream改为My future will not be the dream，我的未来不是梦

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Hello everyboday :
IT is my great honor to be here to make a speech.and this chance is very previous for me .so i will try my best to do it.Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice...

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Hello everyboday :
IT is my great honor to be here to make a speech.and this chance is very previous for me .so i will try my best to do it.Today I am so happy to be here to introduce myself. Nice to meet you! I hope to make friends with you.
My name is LiuZhaoyang. I am twelve years old . I am a outging girl.Ihave many hobbys, like reading books and playing sports .I like study very much.My favorite subjet is maths and English and My dream is to be a writer.I sure my future no dream! I am sure that it will come trueMy favorite color is ocean green.What about you? Ilive a healthy life. My favorite food is rice . What about you? please tell me.I am sure we will make friends with you! thank you for listening to me

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1. 在正文开头要写上“Good morning！”

2. 在“Liu”和“Zhao”中间要空格。

3. 要说你的外貌。

4. 要说你的身体状况。

5. 要说你的学习成绩。

6. 要说说你的优点与缺点，并且说说怎样改正缺点。

7. 要说你家...

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   1. 在正文开头要写上“Good morning！”

   2. 在“Liu”和“Zhao”中间要空格。

   3. 要说你的外貌。

   4. 要说你的身体状况。

   5. 要说你的学习成绩。

   6. 要说说你的优点与缺点，并且说说怎样改正缺点。

   7. 要说你家里的经济状况。

   8. 要说你的联系地址。

   9. 还要在最后说再见。

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