麻烦指出这段话中的错误,There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were only three bedrooms…so she have no own single room until 15 years.Wang Qiang get own room when he is 12 years because his sister ,an elder sister got marry

麻烦指出这段话中的错误,There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were only three bedrooms…so she have no own single room until 15 years.Wang Qiang get own room when he is 12 years because his sister ,an elder sister got marry
麻烦指出这段话中的错误,
There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were only three bedrooms…so she have no own single room until 15 years.
Wang Qiang get own room when he is 12 years because his sister ,an elder sister got marry.
He was very happy and wrote in his diary.
Sharon think children should early own single room,evening a baby.Because it makes people feel more independent.Wang Qiang agree with her and say that’s a neat idea.

麻烦指出这段话中的错误,There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were only three bedrooms…so she have no own single room until 15 years.Wang Qiang get own room when he is 12 years because his sister ,an elder sister got marry
There are seven people in Sharon’s family.But there were(are) only three bedrooms…so she have(had) no(加her) own single room until 15 years(后面加old).
Wang Qiang get(got)(加his) own room when he is (was)12 years(加old) because his sister ,an elder sister got marry(married).
He was very happy and wrote in his diary.
Sharon think(thinks) children should early own(加their own) single room,evening(even) a baby.Because it makes people feel(去掉feel) more independent.Wang Qiang agree(agrees) with her and say(says) that’s a neat idea.

But there (are) only three bedrooms...so she (had) no (her) own single room (for) 15 years.
Wang Qiang got (his) own room when he was 12 years (old) because his (elder) sister got married.
He ...

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But there (are) only three bedrooms...so she (had) no (her) own single room (for) 15 years.
Wang Qiang got (his) own room when he was 12 years (old) because his (elder) sister got married.
He was very happy and wrote (down) in his diary.
Sharon (thinks) children should (own their own single room early),(even) a baby.Bacause it makes people feel more independent.Wang Qiang (agrees) with her and (says) that's a neat idea.

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there are seven people in Sharon's family. But there are only three bedrooms....so she has no own single room until she was fifteen year old.
Wang Qiang gets own room when he was 12 years because ...

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there are seven people in Sharon's family. But there are only three bedrooms....so she has no own single room until she was fifteen year old.
Wang Qiang gets own room when he was 12 years because his sister, an elder sister got married.
He was very happy to write in his diary.
Sharon thinks children should early own single rooms, even for a baby. Because it makes people feel more independent. Wang Qiang agrees with her and says that is a great idea.

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