纠正下英语语法或者优化句子John sent an e-mail to Tom for asking the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A,C,D.For team-C,I have contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by face

纠正下英语语法或者优化句子John sent an e-mail to Tom for asking the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A,C,D.For team-C,I have contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by face
纠正下英语语法或者优化句子
John sent an e-mail to Tom for asking the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A,C,D.For team-C,I have contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by face to face) through EXPRESS earlier today.For team-D,I enclosed the revised commercial part here for you fix up and or advise the bid closing date and time schedule part.For team-A,Tom has talked with Ms.Rudy this morning.She promised the technical part for team A shall be worked out late of tomorrow.If so,tomorrow (9th-Oct-2008) should be OK.
Looking forward to your reply.
Be safe and enjoying your time.

纠正下英语语法或者优化句子John sent an e-mail to Tom for asking the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A,C,D.For team-C,I have contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by face
This is a reply to John's e-mail to Tom enquiring about the status of the issuing of ITB for teams-A,C,D.
Regarding team-C,I contacted the bidders' principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them through EXPRESS earlier today (except CNI23 and BAOYE,which were/will be（注：视情况选一） delivered in person).For team-D,I have enclosed its revised commercial part（注：不知道这是什么,但原则上推荐不要用part,合适的话可以换成information,data,component等词.以下出现part的情况也一样.） here for you to fix up and/or advise on the bid closing date and time schedule.As for team-A,Tom talked with Ms.Rudy this morning,and she promised that the technical part for team A will be worked out late tomorrow.If so,everything should be finished tomorrow (9th-Oct-2008).
Looking forward to your reply.
Have a nice day.

John sent an e-mail to Tom to ask the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A, C, D. For team-C, I contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by ...

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John sent an e-mail to Tom to ask the status of the issuing of ITB for team-A, C, D. For team-C, I contacted with the bidders’ principals yesterday and sent the CDs to them (except CNI23 and BAOYE by face to face) by EXPRESS earlier today. For team-D, I enclosed the revised commercial part here for you to fix up or advise the bid closing date and time schedule part. For team-A, Tom has talked with Ms. Rudy this morning. She promised the technical part for team A shall be worked out late tomorrow. If so, it should be OK tomorrow (9th-Oct-2008).

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