英语纠错-请里面有错误吗?Long ago ,there were all kinds of animals,but now we will never ever see some of animals because they have extincted including dinosaurs.some of animals have vanished because of natural disasters.However,some of the

英语纠错-请里面有错误吗?Long ago ,there were all kinds of animals,but now we will never ever see some of animals because they have extincted including dinosaurs.some of animals have vanished because of natural disasters.However,some of the
英语纠错-请里面有错误吗?
Long ago ,there were all kinds of animals,but now we will never ever see some of animals because they have extincted including dinosaurs.some of animals have vanished because of natural disasters.However,some of the animals disappeared due to the serious consequence the human led to.As a result,some of the animals have no food to eat ,no habitat to live in and no clean water to drink.People killed animals just for their fur or something else.So,some animals are dying out,such as pandas and antelopes.If the animals disappear,the diversity and balance will definitely be broken..The food chain will be destroyed.If we do not expect them to be dead,we are supposed to protect them as well as the nature..Love the enviornment and keep our home clean.

英语纠错-请里面有错误吗?Long ago ,there were all kinds of animals,but now we will never ever see some of animals because they have extincted including dinosaurs.some of animals have vanished because of natural disasters.However,some of the
第一行never后的ever去掉,animals前加the
第二行some 的s要大写,animals前加the
倒数第二行to be dead 改为to die

long ago, there were many kinds of animals, but now we never see any of the animals because they have extincted including dinasaurs. some of the animals have vanished because of natural disaters. howe...

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long ago, there were many kinds of animals, but now we never see any of the animals because they have extincted including dinasaurs. some of the animals have vanished because of natural disaters. however, some of the animals disappeared due to the serious consequence the humman led to. as a result, some the animals had no food to eat, no habitat to live in and no clean water to drink. people killed animals just for their fur or something else. so, some animals are dying out,such as panadas and antelopes. if the animals disappear, the diversity and balance will definitely be broken... the food chain will be destroyed. if we dont expect them to be dead, we are supposed to protect them as well the nature. love the enviroment and keep our home clean.

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第一行never后的ever去掉，animals前加the
第二行some 的s要大写，animals前加the
倒数第二行to be dead 改为to die