求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3QDo you know why you’re sick A lots of people experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of year .If you fail to tackle these problems,they

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3QDo you know why you’re sick A lots of people experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of year .If you fail to tackle these problems,they
求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3Q
Do you know why you’re sick A lots of people experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of year .If you fail to tackle these problems,they are likely to contribute to various illness ,be is physical or psychological.So if it happen,it will lead to you ill.
Why do people experience so many mental health problem Because now social pressure is more and more big.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy .Firstly you should find why should that be .Secondly you can go where you like trip .Lastly,you may find it helpful to talk to your partner,a relative or a friend about your problems,or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant.

求帮忙看一下小弟的英语作文,有什么语法,用词错误的请指示修改下.3QDo you know why you’re sick A lots of people experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of year .If you fail to tackle these problems,they
本来要列1234...条条的,但是i列到第3条发现,咋说呢,语法错误,有些措辞不到位,还有些会赘余.你应该是按照汉语逐词翻译的,所以我就通篇改了,如果哪点有疑问,可以发问哈?
Do you know why you’re sick ? A lot of people have some kinds of psychological problems. If you fail to solve these problems, they are very likely to turn to some various physical or psychological diseases. So in this condition,you would be ill.
Why do people have so many mental problems ? Because people's pressure in modern society becomes more and more.
There are several ways to get over mental problems and keep psychological health .Firstly you should find why these problem exist . Secondly, you can go wherever you like to have a trip .Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk your problems to your partners, relatives and friends, or you can seek support and advice from a psychologist.

Do you know why you’re sick ? A lots of people experience some kinds of mental health problem in the course of ages .If you fail to tackle these problems, they are likely to contribute to various illn...

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Do you know why you’re sick ? A lots of people experience some kinds of mental health problem in the course of ages .If you fail to tackle these problems, they are likely to contribute to various illnesses , physical or psychological.So if it happens,it will lead to your illness.(lead to 后跟名词）
Why do people experience so many mental health problems ? Because now social pressure is bigger and bigger.
There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologic healthy .Firstly you should find why should that be . Secondly you can go where you like to have a trip .Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your partners, a relative or a friend about your problems, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant.你对照一下原文，改动过的就是有错误的，因为没有其他颜色，所以。。。希望对你有帮组

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