请高手们找错误并帮助我把文章改得更好MILITARY TRAINING we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particul

请高手们找错误并帮助我把文章改得更好MILITARY TRAINING we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particul
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we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particularity of P.R.china is collegian need not go into military camp.TO let them experience the toilsomeness of military .collegions must have military training in the beginning of grade one .after seven days toilsome training .i learn a lot of things i never come into contact with.
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请高手们找错误并帮助我把文章改得更好MILITARY TRAINING we have experience the life in army seven days,which is hard but interesting.as far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.the particul
we have experienced the life in army for seven days,which is tough but interesting.As far as i know ,in some countries graduaters from colleges must be compulsory soilders.However,the situation in P.R.china is quite different,for collegians don't have to go to military camp.In order to let them experience the toilsomeness of military ,collegions must process military training at the beginning of freshman year .After seven days toilsome training ,i've learned a lot of things i've never experienced.

We have experienced the exciting life in army for seven days, although living in army is very difficult but that is more interesting. As far as I know, graduates in some countries have to be compulsor...

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We have experienced the exciting life in army for seven days, although living in army is very difficult but that is more interesting. As far as I know, graduates in some countries have to be compulsory for being soldiers for several years. However the exception of China is that it is unnecessary for chinese collegians to go to military camp is letting them only undergo military training at the beginning of life in college. But the most important is that I learned a lot of things I never had opportunity to obtain through these seven days training.

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