作业帮帮我检查一下语法错误Everyone family have lotsof housework.So everyone should help their parents to do some housework .So do I .I ofen help my monther to do some housework such as wash clothes ,cookdinner and so on.In my opolin ,do some hous
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帮我检查一下语法错误Everyone family have lotsof housework.So everyone should help their parents to do some housework .So do I .I ofen help my monther to do some housework such as wash clothes ,cookdinner and so on.In my opolin ,do some hous
帮我检查一下语法错误
Everyone family have lotsof housework.So everyone should help their parents to do some housework .So do I .I ofen help my monther to do some housework such as wash clothes ,cookdinner and so on.
In my opolin ,do some housework can not only show my love to them but also improve our life skills .
The summer holiday s is becoming ,I decide to learn hwo to cook more food so that my monther can have a rest.I believe my parents will fell proud of me
帮我检查一下语法错误Everyone family have lotsof housework.So everyone should help their parents to do some housework .So do I .I ofen help my monther to do some housework such as wash clothes ,cookdinner and so on.In my opolin ,do some hous
补充一楼,最后是feel 不是fell.整体来说除了个别拼写外没有什么大的语法错误,但是阅读感不是很强,也就是说你的句子都比较平淡,句式单一,读起来整体上感觉就像一首只有一个音调的歌曲,没有通过句型和词汇的多种变换让文章丰满起来.当然了,如果这是篇小学或初中作文还是可以的,如果不是的话,建议你平时要注意多阅读和多练习写作来积累词汇量,好的句式和写作的语感.
Every family has a lot of housework.So everyone should help their parents to do housework.And so am I.I often help my mother do some ,such as washing clothes,cooking dinner and so on.
In my opin...
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Every family has a lot of housework.So everyone should help their parents to do housework.And so am I.I often help my mother do some ,such as washing clothes,cooking dinner and so on.
In my opinion,doing some housework not only show my love to them but also improve our life skills.
The summer holiday is coming,I decide to learn to cook more food so that my mother can have a rest.I 'm sure that my parents will fell proud of me.
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