初中英语作文纠错!The importance of Chinese Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people at home in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people outside China speak Chiese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The sc

初中英语作文纠错!The importance of Chinese Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people at home in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people outside China speak Chiese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The sc
初中英语作文纠错!
The importance of Chinese Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people at home in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people outside China speak Chiese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The schoolchildren in the UK and USA are learning Chinese and they like Chinese very much .Chinese will play a more important rule in the future .And if people wiil speak Chinese as an international language in the future it's importance of China as a world leader.英语写作水平差,

初中英语作文纠错!The importance of Chinese Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people at home in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people outside China speak Chiese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The sc
The importance of Chinese
Chinese is spoken by about 1.4 billion people in China ,Chinese communities are all over the world and there are many people abroad speak Chiese as well such as Singapore and Malaysia ,The schoolchildren in the UK and USA are learning Chinese and they like Chinese very much .Needless to say,Chinese will play a more important rule in the future .And if Chinese become an international language in the future,our country would have a steonger inlfuence all over the world. 框架没改,只改了改语法错误,鉴于你才上初中没用高级句式.应该比较符合初中水平.望采纳.（一楼修改不太地道,虽然没大语法错误但不符合英语表达习惯.提高一下阅读量写作语感就出来了.对于初中生来说你的水平还是不错的,祝学习进步!）

Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people in China. Chinese communities are all over the world. There are also many people outside China speaking Chinese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia. Children ...

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Chinese is spoken by about 800 million people in China. Chinese communities are all over the world. There are also many people outside China speaking Chinese ,such as Singapore and Malaysia. Children in UK and USA are learning Chinese and they like it very much. Chinese will play a more important role in the future. If people speak Chinese as an international language in the future, China will become the world's leader.
我只帮你改了一下语法，和最后一句。你最后一句不make sense. 这个改完之后语法肯定没问题，只是你看你需不需要再拓展一下你文章的内容。

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