作业帮这句话写的对吗?For one's characteristic,last but not least ,I think patient is a most important factor which can approach a persom achievement~
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这句话写的对吗?For one's characteristic,last but not least ,I think patient is a most important factor which can approach a persom achievement~
这句话写的对吗?
For one's characteristic,last but not least ,I think patient is a most important factor which can approach a persom achievement~
这句话写的对吗?For one's characteristic,last but not least ,I think patient is a most important factor which can approach a persom achievement~
有错,
1.把patient修改成patience,patient是形容词,patience是名词,这里is是be动词,前面必须用名词哦……
2.most作为最高级,你前面要加the不能用a
3.把最后改成person's
整句话,我帮你润色下(当然你也可以用你自己的）：
I think patience is the most important factor in one's characteristic which contributes to his achievement.
建议改为：
Last but not the least, I think patience is the most important factor which help one to become successful.
patient改为 patience。
首先，patient改为patience，前者形容词，后者才是名词。
其次，characteristic- 用来描述人或事物的特征、特点，并非性格
Sympathy is the feeling characteristic of mankind. 同情心是人类特有的感情。
character - n，用来描述人的性格，像是坚强、懦弱、乐观、积极；也用来表示（字母的）字符/...
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首先，patient改为patience，前者形容词，后者才是名词。
其次，characteristic- 用来描述人或事物的特征、特点，并非性格
Sympathy is the feeling characteristic of mankind. 同情心是人类特有的感情。
character - n，用来描述人的性格，像是坚强、懦弱、乐观、积极；也用来表示（字母的）字符/字号。
He is firm in -他性格坚强。
最后，是a person's achievement，所以建议句子改为
Last but not least，I think patience is the most important character that contributes to one's achievement.
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