作业帮帮我检查美化一下这篇文章如果可以,就帮我用些宾语从句之类的,尽量美化文章.并且检查有无语法错误.字数控制在70个单词左右.原文意思不可以改变.↓ Something interesting in my childhoodMy childhood
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帮我检查美化一下这篇文章如果可以,就帮我用些宾语从句之类的,尽量美化文章.并且检查有无语法错误.字数控制在70个单词左右.原文意思不可以改变.↓ Something interesting in my childhoodMy childhood
帮我检查美化一下这篇文章
如果可以,就帮我用些宾语从句之类的,尽量美化文章.并且检查有无语法错误.字数控制在70个单词左右.原文意思不可以改变.
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Something interesting in my childhood
My childhood was fulled of interesting.Let me tell you something interesting in my childhood.
When I was a child,I like playing besketball with my friend Min.Min was much taller than me,so he always won the besketball games.I always cried becauseI lost the besketball games.Min is a boy,he was afaird of my cry.All in all!When I lost the besketball games.I cried.I could cry all day unless Min said:"Ok!I'd love to give you a charge to win me!"
That's interesting.
帮我检查美化一下这篇文章如果可以,就帮我用些宾语从句之类的,尽量美化文章.并且检查有无语法错误.字数控制在70个单词左右.原文意思不可以改变.↓ Something interesting in my childhoodMy childhood
第一句应该是“was full of”
第二段应该是"I liked playing basketball"
"he was afraid of my crying"
"give you a chance to win me"
"That was interesting"