英语小短文 错误纠正我英语不好能高手找出错误 并且纠正 最好能告诉我错哪里 MY SUMMERMy summer can be very good because I go back China this summer and also my summer is very bad because I got heat

英语小短文 错误纠正我英语不好能高手找出错误 并且纠正 最好能告诉我错哪里 MY SUMMERMy summer can be very good because I go back China this summer and also my summer is very bad because I got heat
英语小短文 错误纠正
我英语不好能高手找出错误 并且纠正 最好能告诉我错哪里
MY SUMMER
My summer can be very good because I go back China this summer and also my summer is very bad because I got heat stroke for 3week.
I very love this summer holiday! Every day I will wake up like 8:00 to 9:00, my grandmother would buy breakfast every day. Therefore, I won’t think what I could eat every morning.
I like play video games with my cousin. My cousin knows how to play computer games and typing, although he is only 8 years old. My cousin likes to play a game for the NDSL call the Kirby and I like it too.
My family said I was lazy, tell me need to go to sports. So, I go to running every day night with my cousin.我的外婆和阿姨希望我陪我表弟去游泳,我表弟游泳很棒,但是我不喜欢游泳,所以我没去.
8月1号的时候我中暑了, 我咳嗽了2个星期,同时我得了胃炎.
顺便帮我下翻译下下面的

英语小短文 错误纠正我英语不好能高手找出错误 并且纠正 最好能告诉我错哪里 MY SUMMERMy summer can be very good because I go back China this summer and also my summer is very bad because I got heat
MY SUMMER
My summer can be very good because I am going back to China this summer but it can also be very bad because I got a heat stroke for 3 weeks.
I love this summer holiday very much! I woke up at 8:00 to 9:00 everyday. My grandmother would buy me breakfast every day therefore I would not worry about getting food every morning.
I like to play video games with my cousin. My cousin knows how to play computer games and typing, although he is only 8 years old. One of his favourite games is a game called the Kirby on the NDSL and I like it too.
My family said I was lazy, told me that I need to go play some sports. So I went running every day and night with my cousin. My grandmother on my mother's side and my aunt wanted me to swim with my cousin but I was not very good at swimming so I never went.
I coughed for two whole weeks starting on August 1st as well as gastritis. This is why my summer was both painful and joyful.

go-went go to running -go to run
My grandmother and aunt want me to go swimming with me cousin, my cousin swimming great, but I do not like to swim, so I did not go.
1 August when I heat up, I cough 2 weeks, while I had gastritis.

好像没看到有写八月一号呀。我按上面那顺序帮你翻啊。
这个暑假挺好的，因为我回到了中国，同时也是不好的因为我中暑了。我喜欢这个暑假，我每天大概八九点起床，我奶奶帮我买好早饭，然而我不知道每天我能吃下什么。我喜欢和我表弟玩光盘游戏，我表弟知道怎么玩电脑游戏，虽然他只有八岁，我表弟和我都喜欢玩一个游戏叫Kirby。我家人说我很懒，说我需要运动，所以我打算和我表弟每天晚上去跑步。
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好像没看到有写八月一号呀。我按上面那顺序帮你翻啊。
这个暑假挺好的，因为我回到了中国，同时也是不好的因为我中暑了。我喜欢这个暑假，我每天大概八九点起床，我奶奶帮我买好早饭，然而我不知道每天我能吃下什么。我喜欢和我表弟玩光盘游戏，我表弟知道怎么玩电脑游戏，虽然他只有八岁，我表弟和我都喜欢玩一个游戏叫Kirby。我家人说我很懒，说我需要运动，所以我打算和我表弟每天晚上去跑步。
got a heat stroke ,like playing,every day I will(will去掉)，下面我在想想啊，希望这里可以帮到你

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My summer can be very good 唔 应该是COULD BE 吧
because I go back China 应该在BACK后面加TO 而且应该把GO改成WENT
also my summer is very 应该把ALSO挪到IS后面
for 3week 在WEEK后面加S

I very love this summ...

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My summer can be very good 唔 应该是COULD BE 吧
because I go back China 应该在BACK后面加TO 而且应该把GO改成WENT
also my summer is very 应该把ALSO挪到IS后面
for 3week 在WEEK后面加S

I very love this summer holiday 应该把VERY去掉 或者改成I LOVE THIS HOLIDAY VERY MUCH
Every day I will wake up like 8:00 to 9:00 不能用WILL 应该改成过去时态 而且不能用LIKE 改成AT
My family said I was lazy, tell me need to go to sports. TELL 改成ASKED ME TO GO TO SPORTS
I go to running every day night 额 GO TO改成WENT 而且没有EVERY DAY NIGHT的用法的 建议改成EVERYDAY
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My grandmother and aunt hope I could go swimming with my cousin together.He is good at swimming but I am not good at.So I hadn't go.
I had got a heat stroke at August 1st，and I also got gastritis at the same time.
唔 希望能帮到你吧 O(∩_∩)O~

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1.back China中间加to 2.第二行got前应有have 3.like改为at 4.what改成that 5.play后面加to 6.call改为called 7.tell改成told 8. go to running
去掉to，还有一个我不确定就是for the NDSL前的for我觉得应该改成by。
翻译：My grandmother and aunt would l...

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1.back China中间加to 2.第二行got前应有have 3.like改为at 4.what改成that 5.play后面加to 6.call改为called 7.tell改成told 8. go to running
去掉to，还有一个我不确定就是for the NDSL前的for我觉得应该改成by。
翻译：My grandmother and aunt would like me to go swimming with my cousin，he is good at swimming but I do not like it，so I did not go there.
I got heat stroke in the In the August 1，I cough for 2 weeks, while I had gastritis.

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