一篇简短的英语class report,求修改英语课上要播放幻灯片和音乐,口头说下面的句子,英语很烂,（格式之类没注意）跪求修改语病等Hey,guys today I’ll introduce my favorite writer to youShe named 三毛 and her

一篇简短的英语class report,求修改英语课上要播放幻灯片和音乐,口头说下面的句子,英语很烂,（格式之类没注意）跪求修改语病等Hey,guys today I’ll introduce my favorite writer to youShe named 三毛 and her
一篇简短的英语class report,求修改
英语课上要播放幻灯片和音乐,口头说下面的句子,英语很烂,（格式之类没注意）跪求修改语病等
Hey,guys today I’ll introduce my favorite writer to you
She named 三毛 and her English name is echo ,well my English name is echo too
She has special beauty with long hair and the biggest smile
The song you hearing is written by her
I love her best because she told me hot to be the pure water in the desert
This is her husband 荷西 a hot 、humourous、responsible man I think his beard is sexy
They live in my heart forever
At last,i will send a word to you ：
Everyday eat a candy and then tell yourself - today is sweet again as expected
——Echo
（每天吃一颗糖然后告诉自己今天果然又是甜的）
这句话要打出来,中间的“-”用的对不对 这句话有无问题
跪谢

一篇简短的英语class report,求修改英语课上要播放幻灯片和音乐,口头说下面的句子,英语很烂,（格式之类没注意）跪求修改语病等Hey,guys today I’ll introduce my favorite writer to youShe named 三毛 and her
Good morning/afternoon,boys and girls!Today I'm very glad to introduce my favorite writer to you.Her name is Sanmao,with an English name Echo,just the same as mine.She is very beautiful,with long hair and charming smile.The song you are just hearing is writen by her.
I love Echo best because she told me to be the pure water in the desert(这句没看明白,是不是你打错了).
Oh,look,this is her husband José.Is he handsome Actually,José is a very humourous and responsible man.I love his beard best!
I love them so much,and I believe they will live in my heart foever.
That's all,thank you!Here is a words from Echoo,I'd like to share it to you--
Eat a candy everyday and then tell yourself today is sweet again as expected
--Echo
大概照你的意思改了,不知道可不可以,可以上网多查些资料参考.

Good morning/afternoon,boys and girls!Today I'm very glad to tell you something aboutnmy favorite writer to you.Her name is Sanmao,with an English name Echo,just the same as mine.She is very beautifu...

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Good morning/afternoon,boys and girls!Today I'm very glad to tell you something aboutnmy favorite writer to you.Her name is Sanmao,with an English name Echo,just the same as mine.She is very beautiful,with long hair and charming smile.The song you are just hearing is writen by her.
I love Echo best because she told me to be the pure water in the desert(这句没看明白，是不是你打错了).
Oh,look,this is her husband José.Is he handsome ?Actually, José is a very humourous and responsible man.I love his beard best!
I love them so much,and I believe they will live in my heart foever.
That's all,thank you! Here is a words from Echoo,I'd like to share it to you--
Eat a candy everyday and then tell yourself today is sweet again as expected

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