英语改错 共有10个错 可以删去 补充 修改Dear Tom in my last e-mail yousaid you were comingto China because you wanted to visit to some famous places in china.how about spend some days with me in my hometown?there are many place of inter

英语改错 共有10个错 可以删去 补充 修改Dear Tom in my last e-mail yousaid you were comingto China because you wanted to visit to some famous places in china.how about spend some days with me in my hometown?there are many place of inter
英语改错 共有10个错 可以删去 补充 修改
Dear Tom in my last e-mail yousaid you were comingto China because you wanted to visit to some famous places in china.how about spend some days with me in my hometown?there are many place of interest in my hometown.I am sure you will show great interest in them.I'll show you around town.you can stay in a hotel and share a room with.my mother spoke English as she is an English teacher,but we can communicate with each other well.besides,my mother cooks deliciously Chinese food.I'm sure you will like your stay on my home

英语改错 共有10个错 可以删去 补充 修改Dear Tom in my last e-mail yousaid you were comingto China because you wanted to visit to some famous places in china.how about spend some days with me in my hometown?there are many place of inter
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Dear Tom,
In your last e-mail you said you were coming to China because you wanted to visit some famous places in China.How about spending some days with me in my hometown?There are many places of interest in my hometown.I am sure you will show great interest in them.I'll show you around the town.You can stay in a hotel or share a room with me.My mother speaks English since she is an English teacher,so we can communicate with each other well.Besides,my mother cooks delicious Chinese food.I'm sure you will like your stay in my home.

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my-->your, visit to-->visit, spend-->spending, place-->places, town-->the town , my mother-->my mother who, spoke-->speaks, but--->so, like-->enjoy , on my home-->at my home,
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my-->your, visit to-->visit, spend-->spending, place-->places, town-->the town , my mother-->my mother who, spoke-->speaks, but--->so, like-->enjoy , on my home-->at my home,
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