雅思地图小作文
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篇一:雅思小作文地图题
雅思小作文题型多样,其中就包括地图题,本文将详细讲解雅思小作文地图题写作技巧。 评分标准
?TA – Task Achievement 任务完成情况
?CC – Coherence and Cohesion 意合与形合
?LR – Lexical Resource 词汇资源
?GRA – Grammatical Range and Accuracy 语法广度与精确度
审题
The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
文章结构
第一段
交待写作目的
第二段
描述1995年的地图
第三段
拿现在的地图和95年的做对比
第四段
总结全文
第一段
This report compares how the village of Ryemouth has developed and changed since the year of 1995.
题目:The map below shows the development of the village of Ryemouth between 1995 and present.
第二段
As is clearly described in the first picture, Ryemouth was a coastal city which was divided into three parts by two roads. In the southern part, there was a fishing port on the sea, with a fish market located in the north and a coffee shop in the north-east. A block of shops was situated on the opposite side of the market?
第三段
In the second picture, the village changed a lot. The fishing port has been removed and the fish market is replaced by apartments. Several restaurants also occupy the place of the shops on the roadside. Moreover, a parking lot is newly built on the east of the hotel. In addition, ?
第四段
Overall, based on the brief description above, it is clear that the general layout of the village does not change a lot, while some newly-built facilities and housing has ornamented the small village.
WRITING TASK 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
The diagram below shows the development of the village of Kelsby between 1780 and 2000.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
新东方樊黎明:A类雅思地图题写作攻略
首先注意两个点:
1. 时态:本文的时间是明确的,是三个过去的时间,因此全文应当使用一般过去时。有些地图会有将来的规划,那么则应使用相应的一般将来时。
2. 顺序:该图属于动态的地图题,这种类型的地图题一律按照时间顺序来写。在这道题中,也就是按照图的顺序依次来写,不要把元素拆开。如果是静态的地图题(即不涉及时间变化的题型),则按照空间顺序来写。
下面我们一起来分析文章的写作。
第一段:引言段。
引言段就是把题目进行改写。原文中的diagram,可以替换成three maps/ illustrations. 原文中的shows,可以改为illustrate/ demonstrate/ indicate等词。宾语development,可以替换成changes,也可以改为宾语从句how the village of Kelsby developed/ changed. 题目中给出的时间比较模糊,可以具体化为in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
【例文】The three maps illustrate how the village of Kelsby changed in 1780, 1860 and 2000.
第二段:介绍1780年的情况。
1780年的情况只涉及到静态的数据,因此只需要用存在句即可表达,不涉及任何变化的单词。但是,考生非常容易把这些元素全部用there be这个句型来表达,从而导致句式单
一。表示存在的句型除了there be之外,还有非常简单的have句型,还有lie/ be located/ be situated 这样的结构。另外还有一种倒装句型,比如“桌子上面有一本书”,可以翻译为on the desk is a book.
除此之外,要注意几个元素的顺序问题。这里有四大元素:住宅区homes,树林woods,农场farms,还有一条河流river。理论上只要按照一定的空间顺序(比如顺时针、逆时针,从
左到右)都是可以的,但是要考虑家庭数量的变化是导致其它所有变化的根本原因,因此建议先写。
还有就是土地单位的表达,land是不可数名词,因此不能说a land,只能说a piece of land。为了表达更加精确,可以用a plot of land(一小块),a stretch of(一长片),a large expanse of (一大片)。
另外还有注意方位词的表达。地图题中常用的方位词有:in the east/ west/ south/ north of ... ; in the eastern/ western/ southern northern part of ...; 如果是在角落,可以用in the southwestern corner of ... ; 在河流的上/下游:at the lower/ upper reaches of the river; 在河岸:alongside the riverbank, 在河流的南端:at the southern end of the river.
【例文】In 1780, Kelsby had only 100 homes. There was a large expanse of woods in the eastern part of the village and four plots of farmland in the centre. In the west was a river flowing from north to south.
第三段:介绍1860年的变化。
这一年的变化并没有时间先后,因此还是按照空间顺序来进行。图上多了一个元素,即道路和桥梁的修建。需要特别注意的是,因为考虑到和上文的呼应,这两个元素一定要放在后面讲,而家庭数量的增加和农场、树林面积的减少应当先讲。这个原则我们简称叫“先拆后建”原则、
第二点是时间的表达问题。上文中刚刚出现过in 1780,这里还是用in 1860的话,句式上就会出现重复。因此可以按照动态图里面学过的表达方法,把年份用作主语,用saw/ witnessed这两个词把数据引出来。
第三点是“建”这个词的英文表达。常见的词有build, construct(一般建筑物),erect(高大的建筑物),establish/ set up(无建筑的物体或抽象的机构),pave(道路的修建)。另外,如果涉及到拆除,则需要记住demolish, pull down, knock down 这些单词。需要重点指出的是,这些表示“建”和“拆”的词都应当使用被动语态,这一点和普通流程图是一致的。
【例文】The year 1860 saw a doubling of the number of homes, but the size of farmland and woods was halved. In the same year, a bridge was constructed over the river and a road was paved linking the river to the residences.
第四段:介绍2000年的变化。
首先还是时间的表达,这里可以再换一种结构,比如140 years later/ After 140 years。首先还是“先拆后建”,?a href="http://www.zw2.cn/zhuanti/guanyurenzuowen/" target="_blank" class="keylink">人凳髁峙┏〕沟紫В缓笤诮淮碌脑兀貉:筒俪 R亲〉氖牵缆肥遣恍枰淮轿坏模恍枰哑鸬愫椭盏惚泶锍隼醇纯桑胠ink A to B或者connect A with B这类词组连接。因此,道路的描写应放到学校、操场的后面。
【例文】140 years later, the number of homes more than doubled to 500, but farms and
woods completely disappeared. In their places, several school buildings and sports facilities were constructed at the south-eastern corner of the village, which were connected with the residential areas in the north via a newly-build road. Some shops opened up along the river bank and a large stretch of wetland for birds was established at the southern end of the river.
篇二:雅思地图作文
地图题写作在很多书上都没有系统的指导,它有别于数据图,构思方面没有数据图那么复杂
地图题分两种,一种为地理变迁题,一种为选址题。首先我们来看地理变迁题,它描述的是一个地方(多为一个城镇)在一段时间的发展变化。如2006年9月A 类 TASK 1, 剑1TEST 4。
地图题注意要点:
1 地图的起始点;
2 方向很重要;
3 认真阅读并尽量记住图中已有的信息
考察点:
1 方向方位路线顺序的把握;
2 相对位置关系的描述和辨别;
3 表方位的词或者词组主要是介词的用法;
4 图中关键词的定位
时态
如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化,文章用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的变化趋势,文章用一般将来时或表“估计”的词汇。如果地图题反映的是一个地方从过去到现在的变化,可用现完成时。
如:现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre.
城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double.
(it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that…..)
1.读题:读图标的含义,哪个是铁路,哪个是村庄等等都读明白了。要看清哪个是公路,哪个是铁路。有没有交叉点等等。
2.确定写的顺序,是按变化写还是按位置写,还是两个的综合体。
3.如果是要求描述变化,把明显的变化先划出,最好用词在图旁边描述,确定自己要写几点。
4.句型多用被动语态。
5.时态使用一般现在时或者过去时,也可能现在完成时。表示将来的时间可以用下列表达:be predicted/be expected to do…
一般不用将来时,用上面的结构。
6.记得用关联的词和句子:
It is obvious/notable/noticeable
It is easy to locate/to find that…
It can be seen from the graph that…
地图题最好的补充资料就是听力题里面的地图题的单词
细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
语态
地图题用被动语态
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was established in Town A in 2000.
地图题的书写顺序:时间顺序和空间顺序
如2006年9月A 类TASK 1
The map shows the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000.
这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序,BODY 分三段分别描述:1780年村庄,1860村庄, 2000年村庄。对每一年的描述,如1780年村庄,我们要注意按方位顺序来描述,否则文章会出现混乱。这就需要考生在考前对方位词进行总结。地图题的方位我们说东西南北,不说成左右。
A 在B 的东方/西方/南方/北方
A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the east/west/south/north of B
(in 表A 在B 内部, ON 表A 和B接壤,TO 表A 和B 分开)
A 在B 内部的某个部位
A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B.
A在B 西北部的120 千米处
A lies 120 km to the northwest of B.
A 在B…..角落
A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示A 在B 外部, in表A 在B 内部)
在河流或道路的南边/北边等
On the south/southern side of the river
On both sides of the road
On the other side
临近马路的地区
The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road
在道路或河流的最南端
At the southern end of the river
A 在B 的对面
A is on the opposite side of B
A is opposite B
A 在B 东部的边界上(A 在B外部)
A is on the eastern border of B
A 在B 东部边缘上 (A 在B 内部)
A is on/ along the eastern edge of B
位于:A is located/situated/sited in/on/to the east of B.
A lies in …the east of B.
中间:
A is in center/middle/central area of B
紧挨着:
A is near /next to/close to/adjacent to B.
对面
A is opposite B.
A is across B
A is on the opposite side of B.
在路边
A is just off the main road.
A parallel B
A intersect B
northbound, eastbound
建设:
construct, build, set up, establish, add
transform, convert
“变化”词汇
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化,那么“变化”词汇必须过关。
分析发现,变化包括两种:图形原有事物的改变,图形新添事物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变:
原有事物可说成:
The original/previous/former garden
原有事物尺寸上变大/变小:
The size of the library has been enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half原有事物在数量上增多或减少:
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
原有事物没了:
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
原有事物被改为:
A becomes B
A is transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B
A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
地图题第二类为选址题 如剑5 TEST 3 TASK 1
The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 为一个城镇的超市选址, 有两个位置 S1 和S2 供选择。选址题并不难写,主要注意两点:位置描述
优缺点
这篇文章我们BODY段可分两段,分别陈述:
S1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
S2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
其中表位置的方位词已在前文有总结,
同理, 2006 年2 月A 类Task 1: The diagram below shows the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions
我们BODY 段可分两段,分别陈述:
Solution 1 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
Solution 2 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
其中,解决方案实际还是要涉及一些方位词。
总之,对于地理变迁题,建议考生考前要充分的掌握上述五点,勤加练习,选址题则把握位置和优缺点两个要害,地图题的写作就会明朗化。
地图题在雅思小作文写作中可以说考的频次非常低,顶多一年一次而已。纵观历次雅思地图题写作,我们不难发现无非就是“两位置方案的二选一”或“某处事物新旧变迁的过程描述”。不管“二选一”还是“过程描述”,请注意,一定不要忘了要结合地图中所体现的“人文与地理环境”进行相互的“比较与对比”且体现“比对结果”;而这里的比对,前者是“横向比对”,强调各自“优缺点比对”,后者则是“纵向比对”,强调“新旧变化”。解题思路有了,那么剩下的是语言上的事情了。 在语言上,请你注意以下几个方面:首先,平时要多积累表示“方位、比对、变化”等方面的词汇和句子表达;其次,要注意时态的选择,“二选一”型常用一般现在时态,而“过程描述”型则要视题目而定,往往综合运用一般过去时态、一般现在时态和现在完成时态;最后,要注意语态的把握,要主动与被动相互结合运用,记住适当被动能给考官好印象,但切忌出现人称代词。
The map below is of the town of Garlsdon. A new supermarket (S) is planned for the town. The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make compari
sonswhere relevant.
The picture illustrates/demonstrates/compares two possible locations for a supermarket (which is) planned in the town of Garlsdon with a population of 65,000. One proposed site is in the countryside, northwest of Gralsdon. One advantage for this plan is that it is close to the residential areas in the north, therefore the local inhabitants have an easy access to it. What is more, the place is twelve kilometres away from Hindon where 10,000 residents live. These people are potential customers for this market.
Another proposed location is located/situated in the centre of Garlsdon ( There is no traffic in this zone). One advantage for this place is that local residents/inhabitants/people are among the potentail customers. What is more, it is 25 km northwest Cransdon( population 29,000) and northeast Brandson. For these reason, there will be a better prospect for business and more potential customers.
The map reveals two possible locations of a supermarket for town of Garlsdon with a population of 65,000.
It can seen from the picture that S1(one suggested location) is a cite/place in the countryside which is closer to the town of Hindon where approximately 1000 local residents live and which is 12 kilometers to the northwest of Garlsdon. Also noteworthy is the fact that this cite is located near maioad, therefore, potential customers have an easy access to this place by car.
篇三:雅思小作文——地图题
地图题分两种,一种为地理变迁题,一种为选址题。首先我们来看地理变迁题,它描述的是一个地方(多为一个城镇)在一段时间的发展变化。如2006年9月A 类 TASK 1, 剑1TEST 4。就这些图形,我们来总结地理变迁题的写作要点。
?时态
如果地图题反映的是一个地方在过去的一段时间的变化,文章用一般过去时。如果地图题反映的是一个地方在将来一段时间的变化趋势,文章用一般将来时或表“估计”的词汇。如果地图题反映的是一个地方从过去到现在的变化,可用现完成时。
如:现在停车场改成了一个剧院。
The car park has been removed and replaced by a theatre. 城镇A的家庭数量从1937年到2020年将翻一番。
The number of homes in Town A is likely to double
(is likely to= is predicted to /is estimated to/is projected to/is expected to )
又可为:
It is likely that the number of homes in Town A will double. (it is likely that = it is predicted/estimated/projected/ expected that?..)
?细节变化
地图每个细节变化都要提到,不要忽视一个细节
?语态
地图题用被动语态
如: 2000年在城镇A 新建了一个医院:A new hospital was established in Town A in 2000.
?地图题的书写顺序:时间顺序和空间顺序
如2006年9月A 类TASK 1
The map shows the development of the village of Kelsbey between 1780 and 2000.
这篇文章大体框架按时间顺序,BODY 分三段分别描述:1780年村庄,1860村庄, 2000年村庄。对每一年的描述,如1780年村庄,我们要注意按方位顺序来描述,否则文章会出现混乱。这就需要考生在考前对方位词进行总结。地图题的方位我们说东西南北,不说成左右。 ? A 在B 的东方/西方/南方/北方
A is/ lies/ is located/ is situated in/on / to the
east/west/south/north of B
(in 表A 在B 内部, ON 表A 和B接壤,TO 表A 和B 分开) ? A 在B 内部的某个部位
A is in the eastern/ southern/ western/ northern part of B. ? A在B 西北部的120 千米处
A lies 120 km to the northwest of B.
? A 在B?..角落
A is at/in the south-eastern corner of B ( at 表示A 在B 外部, in表A 在B 内部)
? 在河流或道路的南边/北边等
On the south/southern side of the river
On both sides of the road
On the other side
? 临近马路的地区
The area adjacent to/ near /next to/ just off the road ? 在道路或河流的最南端
At the southern end of the river
? A 在B 的对面
A is on the opposite side of B
A is opposite B
? A 在B 东部的边界上(A 在B外部)
A is on the eastern border of B
? A 在B 东部边缘上 (A 在B 内部)
A is on/ along the eastern edge of B
?“变化”词汇
地图题描述的是一个地区的变化,那么“变化”词汇必须过关。 雅思中国网海外考试研究中心分析发现,变化包括两种:图形原有事物的改变,图形新添事物。
我们先看图形原有事物的改变:
? 原有事物可说成:
The original/previous/former garden
? 原有事物尺寸上变大/变小:
The size of the library has been enlarged/extended/halved/reduced by half
? 原有事物在数量上增多或减少:
The number of homes has increased/risen/grown/reduced /decreased/dropped/fallen/
doubled/ tripled/ quadrupled to 500.
? 原有事物没了:
The farms completely disappeared/were removed.
? 原有事物被改为:
A becomes B
A is
transformed/reconstructed/redeveloped/converted/changed/turned over to/ into B
A is replaced /substituted by B = A gives way to B
? 图形新添事物
A newly-built road
A new car park was built/established/set
up/constructed/completed and opened in the middle of B
A new IT centre has been added to the library
The year 2000 saw two additions to the land: a pond in the northern part and a vegetable garden on the opposite side.
地图题第二类为选址题 如剑5 TEST 3 TASK 1
The map shows two possible sites for the supermarket. 为一个城镇的超市选址, 有两个位置 S1 和S2 供选择。选址题并不难写,主要注意两点:
?位置描述
?优缺点
这篇文章我们BODY段可分两段,分别陈述:
S1的位置及位置相应的优缺点
S2的位置及位置相应的优缺点
其中表位置的方位词已在前文有总结,
同理, 2006 年2 月A 类Task 1: The diagram below shows the problem of flooding in a UK town and two possible solutions
我们BODY 段可分两段,分别陈述:
Solution 1 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
Solution 2 的解决方案和相应的优缺点
其中,解决方案实际还是要涉及一些方位词。
总之,对于地理变迁题,雅思中国网海外考试研究中心建议考生考前要充分的掌握上述五点,勤加练习,选址题则把握位置和优缺点两个要害,地图题的写作就会明朗化。
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