班级英语作文

篇一：C班-英语作文

书面表达提高训练

理科英语2015.03.29

第一部分：北京高考情景作文：

第二部分：要点和细节（2015届海淀区高三期末英语作文）

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据下面四幅图的先后顺序，为校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，记述你上周日陪同英国朋友Tom 和Mary体验北京的主要过程。词数不少于80。

佳作欣赏1

Last Sunday was a great ______________ for me.

Two of my British friends traveled to Beijing. In order to let them experience Beijing’s traditional culture, I _______ them to walk around the old areas. The mild sunshine ___________the beginning of our journey. We arrived at NanLuoGu Lane. _____________ the coldness, both of them were ________ in the ancient buildings of Chinese features. After I ___________with them something about its culture, they were ___________ in it while __________ around.

We __________ our lunch at a traditional restaurant. So tasty were the taste of Chinese noodles that they we chose to play on the vast icy lake in the HouHai Park. As Tom was not that good at skating, I had to________my assistance to prevent him from _________________. We really had a good time. we called at some gift shops where they bought some paper cuts as souvenirs while enjoying some brilliant Chinese folk show.

______________ pride and excitement, we were on our way home.

佳作欣赏2

Last Sunday was a fine memory for me and my English friends Tom and Mary, for we________around old Beijing and _______________________ Chinese culture together.

we arrived at NanLuogu Alley, on the sides of which ________stores of Chinese features. Walking through the broad or narrow alleys, we __________within the air of Chinese culture, __________ the ancient brick we tasted Beijing Bean Sauce Noodles at a traditional restaurant, which Tom praised a lot with his ________________.

we strolled to the HouHai Park which is ____________ by various tourists. we went to shop some souvenirs along the street nearby. My friends loved Chinese paper cutting, thinking them not only beautiful but also full of happiness and meaning. The shopkeeper introduced the art___________ to them.

. The tour was really exciting and my friends were satisfied with the culture they experienced. What a pride I took!

佳作欣赏3

we headed for Nanluogu Xiang, a famous lane where varieties of snacks and handcrafts of traditional we had a taste of Fried Bean Sauce Noodles. So delicious was it that they couldn’t help praising with their thumbs up. we went to HouHai for skating. Mary was good at it while Tom almost couldn’t stand without my help, which _______ us some ____________________.

I brought my friends to the souvenir shop in the street, where we watched kite-making and paper-cutting show. So ________ on the beautiful paper cuts that each bought one piece to memorize our tour of Beijing traditional culture.

The day ______________ precious memories, a __________ and ____________ of Beijing’s beauty of her culture.

第三部分：框架结构和过渡连接训练(2014北京高考作文)

假设你是红星中学高三（1）班的学生李华，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，用校刊“英语园地”写一篇短文，

记述你和同学们向学校提建议，解决自行车存放问题的过程。

注意： 1. 词数不少于 60. 2. 短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

There was a problem with the parking place for bikes in our school. me every day to see hundreds of

, a classmate and I visited the principal’s office and __________ our advice list to him, while school and promised to think over the problem.

A wave of pride surge through my heart when I see a new entrance is open

2013年北京高考情景作文

篇二：2015启航VIP班英语作文模板

感谢1zhao网友提供照片版

开头段：

1. Whoever in front of this image will be very much/highly/greatly amused/interested/shocked/striked。How interesting and enlightening it is!What is conspicuously/clearly illustrated/presented/portrayed in the drawing above is that__ + 描述图). Odd and funny as it seems/looks to be, such/this happening/ practice/ phenomenon/ story./ case/ event are so pervasive/ widespread that we can’t afford to ignore them .

2.what an amusing and interesting painting it is! It is indicative of common, yet serious social phenomenon:描述+补充描述.However ridiculous and farfetched, as the above image looks/seems to be, the drawer obviously intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.

3.How interesting and instructive the above painting it is.It is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing: 描述+补充描述，simple as the image seems to be, the intended/implied meaning goes far deeper. What on earth does the picture reallys aim to mirror?

第二段：1.There is no denying the fact that/Obviously, we can earily define what the drawer intends/aims/attempts to reflect to us, and the strong and dear message suggested/communicated/presented have is that+主旨：

2.It goes without saying that +主旨

3.This drawing goes far more than/beyond a simple/mere drawing. Indeed, it carries a thought-provoking social implication:+主旨

4.What the drawing vividly presents goes far beyond a simple drawing. Instead, it carries important implications: 主旨

论据: 1.It is alarming that similar events are available in nearly all walks of life, and one of my former clloeages may serve as a good example+例子

2.Nowhere in history has the issue(of+主旨) been concerned so much as in our society.

3.It should be observed that upsetting parallels can be readily found anywhere in all walks of life.

A case in point is an acquaintance of mine, who +举例,According to a survey(conduct by CCTV/china daily last October, 78.6% of the people (主旨)one following the tide）

“__” says Dr wang，中国科学院院士，“----“

1/2/3+Failure to realize the severity of this grim situation will

inevitably decrease our chances of success. And failure to come up with countermeasures will do more harm to our country.Provided /If such stories go unchallenged it is hard imagine what our society will be like years later. Indeed, it is imperative that the whole society be made aware that any prompt action is of great benefit to all.

第三段：1.Much can be done what tops the agenda, I deem, is to help people develop a position and wholesome outlook on life as well as the world and to cultivate noble and worthy value and gualities among them. Moreover, we should appeal to the government to take nationwide prompt actions. All the society should make sustained and concertal efforts to curb such practices. Only in these ways can we maintain a happy, healthy and harmonious society as we all wish.Although it is easier said than done, there are good reasons to expect that such case will be terminally ended or at least significantly reduced

2.Just as an ancient chinese philosophic book concludes,?,“All that is needed for the prevalence of a mislead is that good people do nothing.” To begin with, schools and mass media should serve as a counterbalance to the upsetting/worsening/gimp trend, doing their utmost to develop worthy values and qualities among people and awakening people of they rowing threat of this phenomenon. What is more/Beside, the administration should play a dominant role in taking nationwide prompt actions.

Fortunately,due attention has been paid and effective measures have been encouraged. This is a promising start, although there is still a long way for us to go.

3To paraphrase 19th philosopher xx “?.” I’m strongly convinced that the authorities, schools and mass media should communiate their positive and instructive messages to the public actively and forcefully, lest this kind of grim situdion go unchallenged. If positive and effective measures can be well under way, it may not be long for us to get an easy breath(have a h..,h? society as we all wish) If good people do nothing,there is a real possibility that such trend will turn into a dreadful handicap, thus posing a threat to the solid growth of our society.

翻译一定要写满，而不要在乎句子是否完整通顺。当然别忘了标点符号，最后别忘了句号。

小作文顶多120字，要在第一页写完，不要拖到页面2，切忌！

页面2用于写大作文，220字左右，相当于B5纸的一半，一定要认真练习适应！

大作文

单号版：

What a compelling and thought-provking drawing it is! As is vividly presented in the interesting and instructive cartoon above, ……（句1）,in contrast,……（句2）。What on earth does the drawer really attempt to convey?

注释：thought-provking 中间的是连字符，不能(来自:WWw.zW2.CN 爱作文网)去掉，不管它是位于同一行还是两个不同的行。

Compelling and thought-provking 两个ing 押尾韵，俗称绝句

Interesting and instructive 两个押头韵

in contrast 路标性词汇，前后形成对比。

句1一般用来简单描述漫画内容，句2和句1形成对比

例如：06年的一个小男孩。。。。。。另一个小男孩（两个矛盾方面描述） 04年起点也是终点

穿中国服装的美国女孩。前一句写漂亮，后一句子转折写穿中国服装。 00年世界捕鱼（以前怎么样，现在怎么样）

温室花朵（温室里面花朵怎么样，外面花朵怎么样）

On earth:究竟 加强语气

Drawer=作者。不能写author显得俗气

Really:可去掉，但不丰满

第二段

Simple as the image is the implications（启示）mirrored（反映）are apprantly far-reaching（深远的）。Initially such a phenomenon as revealed in the picture has aroused wide-spread social concern（关注）。Nowhere in the history has the issue of sth（其中of sth也可省略不写）been talked about so much as in our society today（历史上任何时刻都比不上我们的时代这样关注这件事情）

In the second place, the painting reveals an upsetting story（事情）and similar events happened and happening are heared or reported in nearly all aspects of our life.（27字）Additionally,the painter intends to convince us that a package of programs（一揽子项目，计划，方案）should be initiated to reverse the grim stuation----（此处是破折号）lauching（发起，发动）a nationwide education campaign,setting up relvant laws and regulations,and the list goes on.（36字）

三段

To conclude,it is high time that much importance were attached to such cases .And it is imperative （necessary）actions be taken to curb（扭转不好的趋势）such practices（综上所述，结论如下：早该重视这种现象了）.There is reason to believe that as

long as all the society ,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved ,make concerted effort to strive hard,such upsetting stories will ultimately be ended or at least reduced.

注释：

All the society,the authorites and the mass media and every one involved 是用来扩充用的，如果自己觉得空间不够，可以省略1，2个不写

“There is reason to believe that ”可以删除，句子意思不变

第一段双号版

What on earth can we derive from（从什么中获得）this interesting and instructive drawing?It goes without saying that (=There is no denying the fact that 毋庸置疑)what the painter virtually aims to convey is profound. Primarily ,we can learn that such cases are far from being (=not) rare and upsetting (令人心痛的) parallels (类似的事情) can be found any there from our neighborhood and around the world. What’s more,there has been a growing (=more and more) society would be like years later if this pervasive trend (肆虐的趋势) goes unchallenged (放任下去)。Additionally ,to reverse (扭转) the grim situation,effective measures should be entailed （定制）by al parties concerned .Enhancing people’s awareness of such practices (行为) and setting up relevant rules and regulations ought to be top priorities (首要任务) of the agenda. (议事日程)

注释：在第二段中几乎没写东西（指考生完全用的板子，没添加任何东西就可以用），希望考生能够自己根据能力修改，删除，增加一些东西。

第三段

Judging (非谓语动词) from all argument offered above ,we may safely arrive at the conclusive that it is high time that such stories were terminated or at least reduced.I’m strongly convinced that only when such happenings (事情) come to an end,can we maintain a happy ,healthy and harmonious society (和谐社会) as well wish.

呵呵。。。。。。好了，我们现在已经有个大致的骨架了，剩下的所有东西我们都是在这个基础上建立起来的（站在巨人的肩膀上）

强调两点哦：

首先把，部分考生担心射门雷同卷，这个担心是多余的，没必要哦。因为一般人多多少少都是会修改的。

篇三：初中提高班英语作文范文

范文

1.网购利弊 随着互联网的发展和普及，网络购物在中国也变得越来越普遍了，甚至已经成了我们日常生活的一部分了；相信同学们身边一定有不少同学已经通过网络进行购物了，比如淘宝网，京东商城等；但是网络购物究竟有何利弊呢? 请写一篇短文，谈谈网上购物的好处与坏处。 参考范文：

Advantages and Disadvantages of Shopping Online

We talked about the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online these days. Some students think it's very convenient for us to go shopping online. The shops on Internet, for example taobao.com, 360buy.com are open for almost 24 hours a day, so we can buy something we want at any time if we like. What's more, we needn't to wait in a queue.

However, some students disagreed with them. We can't see the things while we are shopping. So we are not sure whether they are good or not.. Besides, we can't enjoy the happiness of shopping with our friends.

2. 缓解压力 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；我的压力是什么；我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。

词数80~100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

Less Pressure, Better Life

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. ….

That’s all. Thank you!

参考范文：

Less Pressure, Better Life

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams.

I’m always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends.

Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired. I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem.

3. 假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：

1.节水节电；2.垃圾分类；3.少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4.步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。 参考词汇：低碳low carbon；纸巾tissue

注意：可适当增加细节了，以使行文连贯。

参考范文：

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your letter asking about our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it.

We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, we’d better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we should sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses should be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world.

Best wishes,

Li Hua