初三作文范文
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篇一:作文范文集20篇(初三中考作文)
红字是标题,文章里的红字是点题。
风雨后的阳光
发表日期:2011年11月1日编辑:ycycedu 有449位读者读过此文 【字体:大 中 小】
[仿真文题]
阅读下面的材料,根据要求写一篇不少于800字的文章。
一个执意要寻找天堂的人,当他历经艰难跋涉来到天堂的门口时,欣喜地大叫:“我来到天堂了!”看门人问他:“你说什么啊,这里是天堂?”寻找者顿时傻了,“这里难道不是天堂吗?”看门人摇摇头,问:“你从哪里来?”“地狱。”看门人又摇摇头。寻找者慨叹道:“难怪你不知道天堂,因为你从来没有去过地狱啊!”
要求:选准角度,明确立意,自选文体,自拟标题;不要脱离材料内容及含义范围作文,不要套作,不得抄袭。
[文题解读]
这道材料作文题,重要角度有三个:其一,寻找者历经艰难跋涉方见天堂;其二,看门人身在天堂而不知;其三,寻找者慨叹,如果没有去过地狱就不知道天堂(反面),只有去过地狱才能知道天堂(正面)。从这三个角度中任选一个去立意,都是符合题意的。
风雨后的阳光
在连续几日的风雨肆虐之后,当那第一缕阳光划破阴霾照耀大地时,我
们会发现阳光是如此灿烂!
“难怪你不知道天堂,因为你从来没有去过地狱啊!”寻找者因为体味过地狱的煎熬,所以更感到天堂的美好。
感受过落日的凄凉,我们才会珍惜曙光的温暖;经历过黑夜的冷寂,我们才会更喜爱白天的喧闹;体味过阴霾的沉闷,我们才更能领略阳光的明媚。自然界总是在向我们阐释着“风雨后的阳光才更显灿烂”的道理。那么,在历史长河中,我们是否也能感受如此“阳光灿烂”呢?
一代“史圣”在遭遇悲惨命运之后,写下了“究天人之际,通古今之变,成一家之言”的《史记》;一代“诗仙”感受在官场的尔虞我诈之后,才更明白自由的可贵,唱出了“安能摧眉折腰事权贵,使我不得开心颜”的诗篇;当代作家史铁生,在经历了残疾病痛的折磨之后,才悟出了生命的真谛,留下了《我与地坛》的华章。这些锦绣文章,无一不是智者在经历风雨洗礼后,放射出的“灿烂阳光”。
生活在二十一世纪的我们,同样也能体会到风雨后灿烂阳光的珍贵,难道不是应该如此吗?
那位高叫“我爸是李刚”的官家子弟,在醉酒驾车伤人后的大言不惭,只能落个锒铛入狱的下场;没有经过失去自由的折磨,他又怎么体会到自由之光的可贵呢?
其实,现实中的我们不也像他一样吗?拥有父母的爱,却不知珍惜;拥有健全的体魄,却不知道运动的重要;拥有活跃的思维,却不愿努力学习??但愿不要在失去的那天,才感叹曾经拥有时的不知珍惜,才更感受拥有时的可贵!
遥望远方的天空,阴霾正在退去,阳光正在穿过云层射向大地,我们会不约而同地欢呼:“风雨后的阳光,真是灿烂!”
[仿真评分]
基础等级(38分)+发展等级(19分)=57分
[评分依据]
本文紧扣材料含义去准确立意,选材丰厚而内容充实,并且联系生活,结构匀称而且过渡自然,所以基础等级得38分。拟题形象化,感悟自然中包涵深刻内涵,所以发展等级得19分。
守望阳光
发表日期:2011年5月12日编辑:ycycedu 有534位读者读过此文 【字体:大 中 小】
【四川成都文题】
按要求作文。
2010年1月27日,美国当代最具影响力的作家之一杰罗姆·大卫·塞林格去世,他因为《麦田里的守望者》一书而成为人们记忆中永恒的“守望者”。在他的生命里,他守望爱情,守望责任,守望淡泊……
请以“守望”为话题,写一篇文章。
要求:①自拟题目;②自定立意,自选文体;③不少于600字;④不得抄袭、套作;⑤不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。
守望阳光
“为了看看阳光,我来到世上。”巴尔蒙特一语道破生活的真谛。我们的生活无论艰辛与否,它的目的是追求阳光,寻找光明。
守望阳光是一种美丽的姿态。在金色的阳光下,向日葵燃烧着生命的热情,她的花瓣被炙烤着,因炽热而扭曲,如同跳着疯狂的街舞,而它的花盘
始终随着太阳转动,不偏不倚,映射着灿烂夺目的光。
照射灿烂的向日葵的是阳光,照亮人一生历程的又是什么呢?是爱,是温暖,是自由,是感恩,是乐观,那是心灵的阳光,只有它们才能帮助我们抵御命运之冬的严寒,度过生活中的漫漫长夜,终以微笑迎接黎明的到来。对心灵阳光的守望,就是对生命的热爱。史铁生就是其中的楷模。上天无情地夺去了他的双腿,让他陷入深深的苦痛之中,陷入沉沦和埋怨。但他终究醒悟过来,以笔代脚,丈量生命的长度,书写人生的意义。在他看来,命运给他的打击不过是蛰伏期的考验。内心的阳光,可以照亮苦难中挣扎的心灵。
守望阳光是一种信念。守望阳光的人,可以穿越苍穹的覆压,让新日破晓的剪影划破陈旧的地平线,划开阴霾的乌云;守望阳光的人,可以冲破心灵的枷锁,让欢乐与自由超越苦难与坎坷,播种希望,收获爱。
守望阳光是一种力量。守望阳光的人,掬一捧阳光便消融了冬日的残冰;守望阳光的人,把苦难和艰辛发酵成生命的欢乐与香甜;守望阳光的人,在岁月的荡涤中,人生的泪融成了璀璨的琥珀。
每天起床,用一颗感恩之心去和朝阳道个早安吧,让我们与晨光一起点燃内心的光明,守望阳光,去爱,去欢笑,去手舞足蹈,去尽情歌唱。为了看阳光,我来到世上。我在世上行走,阳光是唯一的信念。
[得分亮点] 这篇抒情性散文,精妙在于主旨明确,以“阳光”为关键词,无论是写自然界的阳光,还是写心灵的阳光,处处着意铺写阳光的色彩与力量,也就紧扣了主题。
文章采用多种修辞,描写充满了诗情画意,如“以笔代脚,丈量生命的长度”、“把苦难和艰辛发酵成生命的欢乐与香甜”等句子,颇为形象,给
人以美的享受。
风雨中,我站起来了
作者:淹死的鱼oO 来源:9swing.com
记得过去一路的泥泞,记得从前满布的荆棘,还记得那个在风雨中颤抖的我。
过去的那天,是个天气晴朗的日子,太阳高高的挂在天空中,高傲地俯视着地下的一切。紧张无比的我们,坐在肃静的教室中,等待着命运的抉择。老师走进了课室,教室变得更静了,空气就像凝固了一样,只听见大家急促呼吸的声音。
老师用她那柔和的声音,把我们升中考的成绩一字不漏的说了出来。我看着自己那糟糕不堪的分数,心里就像喝了一大杯苦茶,不是先甘后甜,而是越喝越苦涩。我知道,像我这样的分数,能考上重点中学的几率微乎其微,但是,我又能做些什么呢?鲜红的分数在我脑海里转呀转,悲伤的音符瞬间谱写成悲伤的旋律,在寂静的教室里四处飘荡。本来就很好的天气,到了我的心里,就下起了倾盆大雨,雨水“淅沥淅沥??”地在我的心里唱起了哀歌。伴着老师安慰的话语 ,雨越下越大,不知不觉就下在了脸上,并且一发不可收拾,怎么挡也挡不住。
心里尽管是大雨淋漓,但是仍存在一束微弱的阳光,希望着阳光能带给我奇迹。带着这束阳光,我下定决心要去查分,我不相信,也不愿意相信这个厄运的到来。盼望着、盼望着,然而奇迹还是没有降临,而我,就带着悲伤的心情被安排到一间普通而且口碑不太好的中学。 原来,暴风雨下,小花会倒下的,因为小花只是平常的一朵小花。面对家长的责骂、安慰,亲朋好友的询问、关心,这场暴风雨便更变本加厉了。它无情的摧毁这我所有的一切,我的荣誉、我的机遇、我的前途命运,甚至还包括我那弱小的心灵。剩下的,只有让我无地自容得分数和回忆。
暴风雨下了整整一个暑假,开始渐渐退却了,而我那不平静的心也开始慢慢平静下来,带着疲惫的身子,继续走我的人生路。新学期开始了,我带着忐忑的心来到这个新学校。因为曾经名列前茅的我,现在竟要在自己曾经看不起的学校里上学;但却这是我新的开始。我怀着复杂的心情踏入了第七中学的小门,我决定从此不再软弱,不再哭泣。
我不再哭泣,也不再惶恐了,在新学校了,我寻觅了一条通向我理想的路——登上成功的高峰。为了通向理想的目的地,我奋力地向上爬;为了更好的描绘我人生的蓝图,我奋力地向上爬;为了找回从前那自信的我;我奋力地向上爬??终于,我战胜了重重困难,在山腰上再次看到了金黄的太阳缓缓升起,我追着它一直向上。
下过雨后的路是滑的,很容易让人受伤,我曾在这条路上摔倒过一次又一次,直到看到金黄色的太阳放出耀眼的光芒。从此,我在这一条泥泞不堪的小路上更谨慎、更小心的前行,希望总有一天,成功在望。我用汗水筑成了胜利的高台,用努力换来攀登顶峰的希望,虽然雨一直在下,但是我的心却变得更坚强了。风雨,见证了我的成长,风雨,让我学会了自立自强,在风雨中,我终于站起来了。我相信总有一天,我会站在山顶上放眼眺望。
原来,在经历过暴风雨的季节后,小花反而会变得更坚强,不再畏惧风吹雨打,也不再害怕电闪雷鸣,因为小花已不再是一朵平常的小花,而是经过磨砺后蜕变成坚韧的梅花,傲雪凌霜。
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篇二:初三作文范文
初三英语上册范文:
Unit1:设想20年以后的生活,以I want to be a teacher\a soccer player(p37 3a)\a reparter (p5 3a) 为题,写一篇短文.
I want to be a teacher when I grow up ,Beacuse I like kids very much , First I will study very hard ,Then I will go college ,Finally I will be famous and students all like me.As a teacher ,I will help my students to do their homework,make them happy to study ,we will be able to make good friends ,they will talk to me everything about theirs ,I think that sounds so fun!
And if I become a teacher, I will have two vacations every year. I will have free time to travel.Isn't that wonderful?
Unit2:在你的英语学习过程中,你遇到了麻烦,没有学好英语,并且在测试中没有取得好成绩。面对你的烦恼,家人,老师,朋友给予了关心,帮助,也给你提出了建议。向你好友谈谈你的家人。老师或朋友给予你的关心和帮助。以及你的想法。
要求:1.单词数:80词左右2.条理清楚,语意连贯,句式规范,字迹工整。
3.必须用上下列词汇和句型。Advice, should,why not….?
Everyone has many problems including me. For example, I can?t learn English well. And sometimes I can?t get good grades in English exams. What should I do? My family, my friends and teachers gave me lots of help and advice. They tole me that I should listen to the tape every day and read after it for thirty minutes.
My teacher asked me to speak English as much as possible. My mother said,:”Why not write an English composition every day?” I am trying my best to do as what they said. I think I?ll succeed in next exam.
Unit3:假设上周六你和你的朋友Maria约好去看电影.你去他家找他时,他正在到处找电影票.于是你帮他一块儿找,最后在他的课本中找到了.当你们急匆匆感到电影院时,电影刚好开演.他和你都非常高兴没有错过这场精彩的电影.
Last Saturday, my friend Maria and I were going to see a movie together. I got to her home at 6 p.m. When I entered her room, she was looking for the ticket. She looked very worried, so I helped her look for it. At last, we found it between the pages of her textbook. The movie was to start in ten minutes. We hurried to the cinema. Luckily, when we got there, the movie was just on. We were happy because we didn?t miss the wonderful film.
Unit 4: 写一封信给你的家人或朋友,向他们汇报你的成绩.
Dear parents,
I got my report card yesterday. I did OK in some subjects. My math teacher said I was hard-working in this term. My spanish teacher said I was good at speaking, but my listening was not as good as my speaking. My history teacher was very kind. She said I could do better in history. I don?t like Chinese,and my Chinese is so-so. The science teacher said I was a lazy student, but I have tried my best to study science. In fact, science is too difficult for me. I?m so happy that my geography teacher said I did well in writing. That?s my record report of last term. What do you think of it? Yours,××× Unit5:1.假设下面是你对自己未来人生的规划,请根据下面表格所提供的信息并发挥你的想象力,
Everyone has his or her own dream. I have more than one dream. If I practice playing the piano every day from now on , I think I will become a pianist when I grow up. I?ll become famous, and maybe I will have a lot of fans. I also like English very much. If I go to college and major in English, I?ll become and English teacher after I graduate. I?m sure I will be a good teacher. If I major in law, I will be a lawyer one day. I think that is a great job.
2. 假设将来你有了很多钱,这笔钱可以帮你做三件事请,你会用它来干什么呢?请以“If I have a lot of money….” 为题写一篇短文,展开合理想象,60词以上。
If I have a lot of money
If I have a lot of money, I'll buy a big house for my parents. I hope they can live a more comfortable life.
If I have a lot of money, I ?ll plant more trees anf flowers in my city. On the one hand, it can make our city more beautiful. On the other hand, it can improve our environment.
If I have a lot of money, I will give some to charities and help those poor children who can?t go to school. I will be very happy when I see themk studying in bright classrooms.
Unit6:给朋友写一封信,谈一下你的爱好.
Dear Bob,
How is it going? I am sorry to hear that you had a cold last week. I hope you are in good health now. Do you like to collect things? I like collecting stamps. I?ve been collecting them for five years. And I have a thousand stamps so far. I think they have much meaning to me and I learn a lot of things from them. I particularly love stamps with football. It?s just that I want to be a football player in the future. I always watch football matches and I fall in love with this sport. It can help me keep healthy and it?s also a good way to enjoy myself when I am under too much pressure. And the more I play football, the more I want to be a football player.
By the way, what?s your hobby and dream? Can you tell me?
Love
×××
Unit7:你的同桌上课经常和同学说话,影响了你的学习,你对此感到很烦恼,最后委婉的跟你同桌交谈,你的同桌表示了歉意,用英语叙述这件事的过程.
Would you mind keepi
ng your voice down?I have a new deskmate . He is very clever , but he enjoys talking to others very much .
Even in class ,he often talks too much .I know it is bad for my syudy. I can?t stand it . I get annoye. At last, I said to him .“Would you mind keeping your voice down or stop talking?
I can? stud any more.”He said sorry to me and promised not to do it again.
篇三:初三作文范文
1、The most important things in my life
? Use the following points as a guide:
? What are the important things in your life?
? Which one do you think is the most important thing?
? Why do you think so?
Life is just like a painting, colorful and meaningful!There are always many important things that may happen in our life.Among them, learning to be brave, learning to be confident are the important things in my life. I think learning to share is the most important.Why do I think so?Share” is another word for “ exchange with each other”. It enables us to get more ideas or experience from others. It also shows that we have the ability and will to help others。That can help us to have more friends. In my opinion, learning to share is a kind of “life skills”.
As a famous saying goes “One flower makes no garden”, so we should learn to share with others.
2、A day without homework
? What is your school life like now?
? What does a day without homework mean to you?
? What can you do on a day when there is no homework?
My school life is very busy now, as there are always many test papers and
exercises waiting for me. However, a day without homework is worth expecting. If so, arriving home from school, I can turn on the computer immediately and chat with my friends. I can also play computer games without my parents’ complaint. What’s more, I can get into bed early and have a sound sleep. I think I will completely relax myself on that day so as to study more energetically the next day.
Our school life is so busy that I have to deal with my homework until 12:00 nearly every night. In my opinion, a day without homework means having more time to get along with my parents. As a grade nine student, I seldom have a chance to communicate with my parents. So on a day without homework, I may go with my family to the park for a picnic, free from the hustle and bustle of the city life. We may enjoy ourselves by lying on the grass, bathing in the sunshine. In brief, such a day must be expectant and special, and our family life will be greatly improved.
3.A special gift I am looking forward to
? I used to receive gifts like…
? The gift I’m looking forward to is…
? It is special because…
? I hope…
I used to receive gifts like basketballs, cards, cakes and so on, but
the gift I’m looking forward to is a day without homework. It is special because I’m so busy nowadays that I seldom have time to stay with my parents. I hope on that day my parents and I will go to the park for a picnic. We can enjoy ourselves by lying on the grass and chatting with each other, completely free from the hustle and bustle of the city. Then I will be able to return to school relaxed and refreshed. How I expect the gift to come as soon as possible!
I used to receive gifts like a basketball, a swatch or a CD. But the gift I’m looking forward to is a bicycle though I can’t ride it now. How I want to learn it well so that I can ride anywhere I want to go! Every morning, it is my father who always drives me to school in all kinds of weather. Especially in the past few days, he has worked hard until midnight. If I ride my own bicycle to school, he will be able to sleep a little longer and work a bit harder. I hope my dream of owning a bicycle will be realized in the shortest possible time.
4.What Are Good Friends?
? In your eyes what are good friends?
? Have you got any good friends?
? What do they do when you are in trouble? Give some
examples.
Nobody can live a happy life without a good friend. People need friends just like they need water and food. As we all know, friends are just another word for “help”, because good friends always help each other in some ways. For example, when I have difficulties in my studies, my friends will help me to overcome them. Besides, we also work and play together to share our joy and sorrow. In my opinion, a good friend should be honest, friendly, responsible, generous and humorous. In brief, a real friend may spend his whole life with you.
Life has its ups and downs, and only true friends always stay around. Like anyone else, I have got many friends. They often help me when I’m in trouble. Especially, when I fail in an examination, they always care for me and encourage me to study harder. Last year, when I was hurt in a basketball game, my friends took me to the nearby hospital at once and look after me by turns. In my eyes, friends are the most precious wealth that one should treasure all his life.
初中作文