高考英语写作技巧旅游
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篇一:2015高考英语基础写作技巧与练习
高考写作技巧与练习
基础写作的整体要求:
1、认真审题。读懂、读全题目所给信息。
2、对于文字提示的写作,根据内容和需要选择恰当的时态,确定5个要点,列出提纲。
3、对于表格提示的写作,不能逐句翻译,重组材料(有时会重组句子,调整所给要点的顺序),标出5个要点,列出提纲, 做到条理清楚,布局合理。
4、用自己熟悉的句型结构和词语,力求文理通顺,语言准确。没有把握的词句不要写,确定有把握的再锦上添花。
1) 确定句子主干,特别是主语和谓语。没有则需变换或增添主谓。如:
in the activities.
(2)增加主语:主语用the Book Fair或用it指代. 此处谓语可并列:提供,方便(convenient 是形容词,用made it convenient),满足。The Book Fair provided good books for people, made it convenient to buy books and fullfiled/satisfied people’s expectations of increasing their knowledge. 2)确定语态:我们习惯用主动语态,若用主动语态不好表达可用被动语态。
3)一个中文意思可能有几种英文表达,要注意词和短语的词性,比如:我成功了。可用:I succeed.(动词) I am successful.(形容词) I achieve success.(名词)不能说:I successful. 或 I success. 又如:我对阅读没兴趣。I have no interest in reading.( 名词) 或 I’m not interested in reading. (形容词)
5、遇到一时想不起来的词或短语,不会表达的句子,需变通。
1)可用同义词、近义词或短语代替。如:高度赞扬:sb be highly praised 不会写这个单词,则可用 think / speak highly of sb
2)用相关的意思代替该词或句子,避免出错。如:这使我们能腾出更多的时间专心学习。若不会表达“腾出”“专心”,可直译成:这使我们有更多的时间认真学习→It makes / enables us to have much more time for study / to study hard..
3)也可变换句式。
6、注意文章的长度。如果内容多,应多用并列句和复杂句(定语从句,名词性从句,现在分词或过去分词做状语等),内容不多,可用简单句,并适当增补内容。
7、写作基础不好的同学,多选择使用简单句,先保证句子准确,少语法错误,再循序渐进。基础好的同学,可不断尝试简单句、并列句和复杂句并用,前提是保证语法正确、句子无误,不要因追求句子复杂而出错。
8、时间:要求10分钟完成,至多12分钟。
顺序:审题→重组材料(重新标出5个要点)→列出提纲→组织句篇→检查
基础写作练习:
第一类:表格摘要式
要求表达某次活动、竞赛等涉及的时间、地点、对象、目的、内容、影响、感受等信息:
注意:第一句话应该把事情叙述清楚:谁什么时候在哪做了什么事情,或什么事情在哪发生,然后再表达其他要点。
Writing 1:
假设你是李华,湛江市某中学高三学生,为了鼓舞节约,更好的利用学习资料,学校学生会于五月初向高三年级学生提出倡议,倡议高三年级学生在毕业前把用过的资料留给低年级的学生。活动获得所有高三年级学生的大力支持,请你给某报社写一封信,叙述开展活动的情况和成果并发表自己的看法。
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
注意:信的开头和结尾已经给出,不计如总句数。
Dear editor,
I am a student of Senior Three in a middle school in Zhanjiang.
…
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
Writing 2:
请根据下面的提示,写一张有关举行英语演讲比赛的海报。
写作内容:
1、比赛目的:提高学生讲英语的能力。
2、报名手续:凡愿参加者可到各班长处报名。
3、比赛时间:2008年11月4日下午2点。
4、比赛地点:第一会议室。
5、评比方法:有5位教师作为评判员,前十名将获鼓励奖。
6、举办单位:五中学生会和团委。
7、海报发布时间:2008年10月23日。
写作要求:
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、标题已给出。
参考词汇:团委 the Youth League
A Poster for an English-Speaking Contest
Writing 3:
假设你参加你校组织的“关爱生命,携手艾滋儿童”的活动,请根据以下信息,写一篇英文日记,叙述活动情况。
写作内容:
写作要求:
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、日记的开头已给出。
December 1st, 2008 Saturday
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
第二类:人物介绍
要求表述人物的姓名、年龄、爱好、性格品质、成绩贡献等其他情况。
Writing 4:
请用英语为上海出版社的《学生英语报》写一段人物介绍,介绍游泳运动员罗雪娟。
写作内容:
1、罗雪娟(Luo Xuejuan):昵称:罗罗;女,23岁,浙江人;
2、从小接受游泳训练,2000年崭露头角;
3、取得成绩:2003年在巴塞罗那(Barcelina)世界锦标赛中获得三枚金牌;2004年雅典奥运会打破世界记录,夺得100米蛙泳(breaststroke)冠军;
4、其他情况:由于身体原因,现宣布退役,将到北京大学读书。
写作要求:
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、介绍需包括所有内容要点,但不要逐条翻译。
Writing 5:
假设你是李华,你们市青年志愿者协会正在招募志愿者,你希望你能成为其中的一员。请按要求用英语给组委会写一封申请信:
写作内容:
1、年龄 17岁,男,衣着朴实;
2、学习情况:学习很用功,独立完成作业,各科成绩优良;
3、品质:待人和蔼,乐于助人,耐心帮助同学学习英语;
4、业余爱好:喜欢音乐,爱好体育
第三类: 地理位置、游览、观光行程介绍
要求介绍某个地方的位置、面积、交通、特征;旅游景点、行程或路线
Writing 6:
写作内容:
写作要求:
5、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
6、将5个句子组织成连贯的短文,使用必要的连接词。
Writing 7:
假设你是一名导游,将带团到广州霞山。现需写一份发言稿,准备出发在出发前对美国游客简单介绍当天的行程和其他事项。
写作内容:
1、霞山位于广东东北部,距广州280公里,乘车6小时;
2、在韶关市停留1小时,吃午饭;
3、下午5点到南雄,晚宿南雄宾馆,第二天去游玩霞山;
4、路途遥远、艰难,但沿途你会介绍美景和趣闻让游客忘记疲劳。
写作要求:
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、短文的开头已经为你写好。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Writing 8:
假如你在桂林度假时买了一张明信片,准备寄给一位美国朋友。请向你的朋友简单描述桂林风景和你度假的情况。
写作内容:
1、天气:晴朗
2、住处:位于市中心的一家酒店
3、活动:拜访农家,宁静的乡村不同于你所在的城市
4、返回:本周日
5、感受:值得一游,希望你的朋友有机会来桂林旅游
写作要求:
1、只能使用5个句子表达全部内容;
2、短文的开头和结尾已经为你写好。
Dear Philip,
I am on a holiday in Guilin, Guangxi Province and have bought this post card for you.
………
Best wishes!
Yours,Li Ping
第四类:比较、对比
表述调查或讨论的结果,多少比例的人看法怎样,持什么样的观点等。
Writing 9:
最近,为了更好地了解中学生的课外阅读习惯,我们在2000名学生中进行了一次调查(survey).以下是调查的一些情况:
写作内容:
请根据以上调查数据,写一篇短文,需包括如下内容:
篇二:2015英语高考写作提分技巧大全:怎样写旅游日志
怎样写旅游日志
写作技巧
旅游日志事记录一个人在旅游过程中的各种格言的见闻等,关于如何写一篇吸引人的旅游日志,应该注意以下技巧:
1.在记录日志的页码上写下以下分类:日期,地点,做了什么,看见了什么,在哪儿吃
的饭,一天中最好的时间或者地点
2.天天写日志。用你的来自旅游过程中的艺术品,明信片,和照片等来为的你的日志作为
插图。在旅游日志上粘上门票,收据,纪念品等,把你的日志本变成一个很酷并且五颜六色的本子
3. 记日志很容易开始但是也容易放弃,所以要每天从少量开始,比如说从每天的早饭后开始或者是在你头脑中还记忆犹新的时候开始。
基础训练
一:翻译下列有关旅游的短语
1. 旅行 2. 旅游
3. 游览,漫游 4. 商务旅行 5. 组团旅游 6. 环程旅行 7. 包办旅行 8.单程旅行 9.往返旅行 10. 假期 11.远足
12.远征,探险 13. 搭乘 14.旅行指南 15. 旅行路线 16. 中途下车暂停 17.停歇点,中间站 18. 上午10时出发 19.夜12点抵达 20.停留 21.返回 22. 乘船,上船
23.下船 24.延期 25.旅行社 26.航空公司 27.旅行支票 28.票
29. 单程票
30. 往返票,双程票 (美作:round-tripticket) 31.票价 32. 半票 33.票,票价 34.旅客 35. 护照 36.签证 37.证件 38. 身份证 39.海关
40. 安全通行证 41.旅行者
42. 旅游者
43. 旅行者,旅游者 (美作:traveler) 44.旅行推销员(美作:travelingsalesman) 45.偷乘者 46. 淡季 47. 旺季
答案:
1.journey, trip 2.tourism 3.pleasuretrip 4. businesstrip 5. organizedtour
6. circulartour
7. packagetour, inclusivetour 8. outwardjourney
9. returnjourney, roundtrip 10. holiday 11. excursion, outing 12. expedition 13.hitchhiking, hitching 14. itinerary 15. itinerary, route 16. stopover 17. stage
18. departureat10a.m. 19. arrivalat12 p.m. 20. stay 21. return
22. embarkation, embarcation 23. disembarkation 24. delay
25. travelagency 26. airlinecompany 27. traveller'scheque 28 ticket
29. singleticket 30. returnticket 31. fare
32. half (fare), half-priceticket 33. passage 34. passengers 35. passport 36. visa 37. papers 38. identitycard 39. customs
40. safe-conduct, pass 41. tripper, hiker 42. tourist
43. traveller
44. commercialtraveller 45. stowaway 46. off season
47. on season二:阅读下列短文,填入表格信息
On our third night in Laos, we slept in a village on little pieces of wood. The village had not lights. In a few houses, however, we could see candles. On the small road near the village, we heard only one truck all night.
The river was also quiet, like a man singing in a low voice from a boat as it slowly passed us. The next morning we made an early start and travelled quiet far before lunch. Along the way, strange buses called tuktuks passed us. For lunch we ate a special noodle soup. After lunch we were tired, so we put our bikes next to many other bikes on a bus and we were driven to Bieniane. A cage of chickens sang for us all the way. The capital city of Laos was very busy. Trucks, buses, jeeps and motorbikes filled the streets. We got on our bikes again and went to see a famous Buddhist temple.
Early that evening we cycled south of the city and followed the river to a big waterfall. As it got dark, a bright orange moon appearedin the sky. The next morning we stopped to talk to an old man fishing on the Mekong. We greeted him with our hands put together, in the way of his people.
三:填词
Writing a travel journal is a major part of my travel.Why a travel journal?These days there are so many other choices -create a ____1____, social bookmarking, email, phone...But there is name, the date, and the name of the place I'm in.
When I'm on the road, my thoughts and feelings still better with pen and paper. Internet Café.
The simple action of that new notebook is almost ritualistic - it tells me my trip has really begun.
recording the facts, such as the of a great food stall or a particular train timetable, for future use or just to do it. If you 8to sell articles for profit or become a travel writer, you'll need all those first your journey - with new friends along the way, or with family and friends back home when you return.Your journal can also be friendly and private, never t
o be shown, to be guarded preciously. 答案: 1. blog 2. notebook 3. flow 4. foreign5. opening 6. writing 7. location 8. decide
9. impressions 10. sharing
四:阅读下面的文章,完成下面的句子
How to Write a Travel Journal
A travel journal is one of the best ways to preserve memories of a long voyage. Years later you can read your travel journal and enjoy reflecting on long forgotten experiences in far off places.
Step 1
买一个质地优良的旅游日志本). Be sure your travel journal is bound like a book. Hard bound travel journals are the best. Step 2
养成一个每天记旅游日志的习惯). When you are on a busy journey it is easy to forget to write. You will regret this later when priceless memories are forgotten.
Step 3
___________3____________(利用你停止旅游的时间来记日志). There is a surprising amount of sitting around while traveling. You can always jot down a few lines in your travel journal when you are on trains, waiting for planes, drying your laundry, or waiting in line. Step 4
在你的旅游日志中注明日期). In your heading write down the day, where you are, who you are with, maybe even the weather and what you ate that day. These are the first details people tend to forget.
Step 5
____________5_____________ (主要关注你的感觉). Listing facts and figures is fine but that isn't why you traveled. A long journey is a time for contemplation and self reflection. Being in a foreign environment heightens emotions and reactions. Memories of these feelings fade quickly with time. Writing about those experiences while the memories are fresh is essential. 答案:
1. Buy a high quality strong travel journal
2. Get in the habit of writing in your travel journal every day 3. Use your "down time" for your travel journal 4. Date your entries in your travel journal 5. Focus on writing about how you feel
篇三:高考英语复习书面表达复习 10 旅游类话题指导
专题10 旅游类话题指导
实例指导
1---罗马旅游
【写作任务】
【写作指导】
1.仔细审题,确定表达信息。
本文属于日记类应用文写作。文章要求叙述旅游观光的行程,描述各景点内容,可以按照行程以及参观景点的先后顺序展开写作。另外,本写作要用第一人称,时态以过去时态为主。
日记应主要包括如下要点:1)旅行方式以及旅游地点一一罗马,并对其进行整体介绍;2)参观的三个景点的描述一一国立博物馆、凯旋门、圆形竞技场等;
3)表达自己的感受和计划。
2.选词组句,表达信息。
写作过程中可以参考如下词汇和句式结构:
1)信息表达词汇。如:描述景点的词语:beautiful,precious;a symbol of,be well known for,splendid,be worth等;表达游人感受的词语:be attracted by , be struck by,prefer to,I really think等;客观描述地理事物的词语:be situated in the middle ; a long history等。
2)向式结构。为使用有限的文字描述美丽的景点,也为了提高表达的质量,写作过程中要尽量多地使用复杂的句式结构,如:
1. 用含有时间状语从句的复合句表达“抵达地点以及感受”:I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived the there at 7 o’clock in the morning by plane.
2. 用过去分词短语作状语,表达地点,并用定语从句补充说明其悠久的历史:Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula , Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2,500 years.
用定语从句补充说明参观景点后的感受和收获:In the morning we visited' Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures.以及we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo, which is very beautiful in the setting sun.等。
3)篇章结构中的过渡与衔接词语。如:therefore,first ,then , finally , but等。
【学生习作】
May 1 st Friday Sunny
Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italy. I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 o'clock in the morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known for its cultural relics which have been there for a long history of 2.500 years. Therefore, many tourists from all over the world would prefer to spend their holiday here, espeically in warm spring.
In the morning we visited Museo Nazionale Romano, where I enjoyed many precious and beautiful sculptures. Then we went to enjoy the splendid building of Triumphal Arch in the afternoon. Nearly at dark, we had a chance to visit the symbol of Rome, Colosseo,. ①
that is very beautiful in the settine sun.
It was time for us to leave for another city, but I really think that Rome is ②very worth a second visit one day in the future.
得,非常
值得”。
3.画龙点睛:第一段的最后一句显得罗嗦:将后面的原因状语从句改成简单的介词短语就可以,如改成:Therefore,many tourists from all over the world would refer to spend their holiday here , especially in warm spring.
【参考范文】
May 1st Friday Sunny
Today I paid a visit to one of the oldest cities in Europe, Rome in Italy I was attracted by the beauty of the city the moment we arrived here at 7 o'clock in the
morning by plane. Situated in the middle of the Italia Peninsula, Rome is well known
实例指导2--- 四川名胜
【写作任务】
你的英语老师在上课时样你们准备介绍中国的某个省份的旅游景点。你放暑假的时候准备去四川,因此你在网上查了一些资料,请用英语写出有关资料,与同学
1. 文章要包括以上所有要点,可以适当增加细节,以使文章连贯。
2. 词数:120左右。开头已经为你写好,不及入总词数。
【写作指导】
旅游景点的描写应该属于介绍类说明文,写好这类文章,这对于我们平时对于介绍给亲朋好友一个你比较熟悉的地方时是很有帮助的,在写作时要注意下列问题:
1.不宜过多介绍景点,我们以跟介绍一下景点的历史、特色、以及它在当地的一个地位??
2.这种文章是客观的介绍。通常介绍其地理位置、面积、气候、自然资源和居民等,可以根据题目要求加上自己的评论。
3.组织这类文章的结构,要注意安排好说明顺序,描述要详略得当,重点突出,使文章错落有致。
4.描述地点时需要我们准确掌握表示方位的词或短语。
5.本文的时态主要以一般现在时态为主。
【学生习作】
①Today I will tell you some information about Sichuan Province’s travelling.
Sichuan Province, ②which capital city is Chengdu, lies in the southwest of china and covers an area of about 485,000 square kilometers.
It is rich in tourist attractions and enjoys many world-famous places of ③interests , such as Jiuzhaigou and the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project. ④⑤The other attraction is the Dujiangyan Irrigation Project, which was built over 2,000 years ago and is ⑥
⑦
In a word, the nice weather, convenient transportation and the variety of famous hot food can also⑧语从句,不能用which引导,这也算是一个这个很好的复合句中的一个小瑕疵吧! ③ interests →interest。place of interest 作为一个复合名词,意思为“名胜”,它的中心词是place,因此复数形式应该是places of interest。只有表示性别的这类复合名词,例如:woman doctor ,其复数形式才为women doctors 。
④这个句子写得很好,既出现了句式结构be known for、so…that …, 还用到了whose引导的非限制性定语从句,可见这个同学的语言基础结构不错。
⑤ The other→Another。
⑥ a→an。尽管这个地方由于失误出错,但是很好地用到了play part in 这个短语。
⑦In a word ,起到了承上启下和最后总结的作用。
⑧ 使用了“make sth.+形容词作宾补”这个结构。
实例指导3—介绍伦敦
3.描述地点时需要我们准确掌握表示方位的词或短语。
4.本文的时态主要以一般现在时态为主。
5.要适当注意书信的格式,以免影响得分。
【参考短语和句型】
短语:in front of , in the front of , close to , at the back of , on the other side, lie in , in the north of ,to the east/ west/ , on the bank of , as for the weather, opposite to , arrive at, arrive in . a population of ; as you know
句型:how time flies; it has been two months since I … ;is located in , it is a modem city /place with a long history and rich tour resources, the most famous is/ are , be well known for, it is really an impressive visit , another attraction is…, what
impressed me most is that … ; I have just been to …, which… , I hope I can hear from you soon.
【范文欣赏】
Dear Li Ping,
How time flies! It has been two months since I left China and came to London.As you know, London is the capital of Britain, which is on the bank of River Thames. It’s a very big city with a population of about 7 million. It is also a busy
place. People here are usually friendly and helpful, but they are often in a hurry. What impressed me most is that the weather is chopping and changing. I begin to
understand why the English people always talk about the weather. London has many beautiful parks and gardens and other famous places of interest. I have just been to London Museum and Hyde Park recently.
How are you now? I miss you very much. I hope I can hear from you soon.Best wishes!
Yours,
Wang Lin
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