麻烦帮我检查一遍这篇英语文章是否有错误This year is over.To welcome the new year.I make my New Year's Resolutions .Let me tell you about it .First ,I will work hard at all my subjects .I will listen to my teachers carefully .I hope

麻烦帮我检查一遍这篇英语文章是否有错误This year is over.To welcome the new year.I make my New Year's Resolutions .Let me tell you about it .First ,I will work hard at all my subjects .I will listen to my teachers carefully .I hope
麻烦帮我检查一遍这篇英语文章是否有错误
This year is over.To welcome the new year.I make my New Year's Resolutions .Let me tell you about it .First ,I will work hard at all my subjects .I will listen to my teachers carefully .I hope to get good grades.I think they are the first important in my New Year's Resolutions.Then ,I will do more exercise and eat more healthy food to keep healthy and strong.They are important,too.Finally,I want to help my mother do some housework.Because my mother is very tired,I want to do something for her.I know it's not easy,but I think I can do it.Because this is my New Year's Resolutions.

麻烦帮我检查一遍这篇英语文章是否有错误This year is over.To welcome the new year.I make my New Year's Resolutions .Let me tell you about it .First ,I will work hard at all my subjects .I will listen to my teachers carefully .I hope
This year is over.To welcome the new year.I make my New Year's Resolutions .Let me tell you about it .
前面用RESOLUTIONS,后面应该用THEM.将it 改成 them.
I hope to get good grades.
你要是想表达得多少多少分的话,将grades改成scores.grade是一个等级的概念
I think they are the first important in my New Year's Resolutions.
important 为形容词,你要是想表达’最重要的事情可以改成‘ the most important things
Then ,I will do more exercise and eat more healthy food to keep healthy and strong.
keep 后面应该加一个 me
Because my mother is very tired,I want to do something for her.
因为母亲很累,为什么累?你可以在前面加上,母亲每天做了很多家务,所以很累,所以想要帮她.这里只是给出点建议,让逻辑上看起来通顺.
Because this is my New Year's Resolutions.
后面是resolutions 前面就要用 these are

没有什么语法错误，但是文章的词语用的比较粗糙，不太精准，

第一行To去掉
第二行没有错误
第三行first改成most
第四行exercise用复数
后面都没有错误

第三句make——made
第四句it——that
第五句first——firstly
第八句important后加things

year右面应该是逗号，make改made。first改为Firstly。work at的搭配不恰当，at改为on。
I think they are the first important in my New Year's Resolutions.不通。the去掉，first改成very。

有一些语法错误,但还是可以的