求英语帝帮忙看看有什么语法错误吗?My favourite season is summer,Because I was born in the summer.summer is very hot,so I like wear a T-shirt in the summer.There are many summer fruit,my favorite fruit is watermelon,Every time I eat ver

求英语帝帮忙看看有什么语法错误吗?My favourite season is summer,Because I was born in the summer.summer is very hot,so I like wear a T-shirt in the summer.There are many summer fruit,my favorite fruit is watermelon,Every time I eat ver
求英语帝帮忙看看有什么语法错误吗?
My favourite season is summer,Because I was born in the summer.summer is very hot,so I like wear a T-shirt in the summer.There are many summer fruit,my favorite fruit is watermelon,Every time I eat very satisfied,and then everything can't eat.I like to play basketball in the summer,and then to go swimming,because It's very cool.我最喜欢的季节是夏天,因为我出生在夏季.因为夏天很热,所以我喜欢穿T-桖衫在夏天.夏天有很多水果,我最喜欢吃的水果是西瓜,每次我都吃的很饱,然后吃不下任何东西.我在夏天喜欢打篮球,然后再去游泳,因为那很凉快.

求英语帝帮忙看看有什么语法错误吗?My favourite season is summer,Because I was born in the summer.summer is very hot,so I like wear a T-shirt in the summer.There are many summer fruit,my favorite fruit is watermelon,Every time I eat ver
我认为错误有以下几点：
1.通常说in summer;
2.I like wear 应改为 I like to wear...
3.There are many summer fruit 此处fruit 应加-s.
4.watermelon要加-s

There are many summer fruit.
fruit这里不可数不用are吧
and then everything can't eat应该是and then can't eat anything吧

i eat "what" very satisfied

以下是仅从语法正确的角度改写的文章（修正了几个语法错误，从遣词造句的角度还有许多可改进的地方在此不作涉及）
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My favorite season is summer, because I was born in summer time. As we know summer is very hot,...

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以下是仅从语法正确的角度改写的文章（修正了几个语法错误，从遣词造句的角度还有许多可改进的地方在此不作涉及）
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My favorite season is summer, because I was born in summer time. As we know summer is very hot, that's why I like wearing T-shirts in the summer. There are many fruits in the summer, my favorite one is watermelon. Every time I take too much and get so satisfied, then I couldn't eat any more. I like playing basketball in the summer and go swimming afterrwards, since it's very cool.
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