这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?Good morning teacher,I am glad to be here for your interview.My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university of technology,and I major in accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you come fro

这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?Good morning teacher,I am glad to be here for your interview.My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university of technology,and I major in accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you come fro
这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?
Good morning teacher,I am glad to be here for your interview.My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university of technology,and I major in accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you come from,and never want to leave .I love my hometown very much,because in my mind it's a splendid city.it's a place of leisure and eden of the east.it's colorful and charming.It's also reflected in various local snacks.U might doze off in all the comfort here.
I enjoy learning English.At the beginning of learning English,I resisted learning it with my energy ,because I was enforced by my teacher and parents.But now,I love it,and enjoy it.( why u love it?) I think the most important skill in English is speaking,as English is a skill of communication.I will have sense of achievement when I communicate with people in English.
Which subject I like best is marketing,because I think it is very interesting,and I can get a lot of knowledge from the class,which was very important in my future job.I dislike subject is Marxist Theory.It’s very dull!
In my spare time ,I prefer travelling and cooking For the coming winter holiday ,I'm planning a trip of jiuzaigou with my classmates.I make no doubt of it will be impressive.
my college life is so freedom that I have enough time to do something that I like.such as reading some novels,taking part in some activities ,and I think it’s different from the life in middle school.
That’s all.

这篇英语文章有没有什么语病错误?Good morning teacher,I am glad to be here for your interview.My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university of technology,and I major in accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you come fro
Good morning teacher,I am glad to see u .My name is xulianghong,I come from Chengdu university ,and my major is accounting.My hometown is Chengdu ,a city which you never want to leave .because it's splendid in my mind .I love my hometown very much .it's a place of leisure and eden of the east.it's colorful and charming.It's also reflected in various local snacks.U must be feeling very comfortable here.
I enjoy learning English.At the beginning,I was enforced by my teacher and parents.But now,I love it,and enjoy it.( why u love it?) I think the most important in English is speaking,as English is a skill of communication.I will great when I communicate with people in English.
my favorite subject is marketing,because I feel it is very interesting,and I can get a lot of knowledge from the class,which is very important in my future .I dislike subject is Marxist Theory.It’s very dull!
In my spare time ,I prefer travelling and cooking !For the coming winter holidays ,I'm planning a trip to jiuzaigou with my classmates.I think there is no doubt it will be impressive.
my college life is so freedom that I have enough time to do something that I like.such as reading some novels,taking part in some activities ,and it’s different from the life in middle school.
That’s all.thank you!
总的来说,还是很中国式英语,尽量避免用复杂的句子,这样错误会少一点,有些句子是在中文里头可以这样复杂,但是英文并不是这样的,当然英语也有复杂的句子,但要是不会用,那还不如不用