帮我改改错误,I have almost two years of working experience in designing,I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin,I have a wide range of interest which includes drawing,music,etc.The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,Aut
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帮我改改错误,I have almost two years of working experience in designing,I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin,I have a wide range of interest which includes drawing,music,etc.The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,Aut
帮我改改错误,
I have almost two years of working experience in designing,I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin,I have a wide range of interest which includes drawing,music,etc.
The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,AutoCAD,3dMax
Because I have a real confidence in myself,So I urgently crave for dear sir can recruit me,I will prove my ability and test my will to accept all the new challenges for rewarding I would be employed by you.
有没有什么语法错误就行了,我的目的是能让老外看得懂就可以了,并不是发表什么论文/
帮我改改错误,I have almost two years of working experience in designing,I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin,I have a wide range of interest which includes drawing,music,etc.The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,Aut
I can both speak good spoken English and mandarin
should be:
I have good communicaton skills with both oral english and mandarin.
看起来你的语句是简历上用的,整体的语句用法感觉比较生涩.建议你多看一些英语招聘的job description,然后仿照里面的语句去更新一下你的简历.上面我提出的只是一个小小的觉得不好的地方,整体来说,你的这段话需要再做大的修改才能更加圆润,更加英语化,而不是Cnglish.仅此建议,不喜勿听.
The design software I can operate:Photoshop,CorelDraw,AutoCAD,3dMax
should be:
The software design tool I can operate includes:Photoshop,CorelDraw,AutoCAD,3dMax
And
because 和 So 不能连用.而且前因和后果没有必然联系.你觉得你自己有信心,但是不能成为人家雇用你的理由.语义上有问题.