作业帮这句英语有错误吗?帮我看看改改~The world seems disappeared when I stare at your eyes!
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这句英语有错误吗?帮我看看改改~The world seems disappeared when I stare at your eyes!
这句英语有错误吗?帮我看看改改~
The world seems disappeared when I stare at your eyes!
这句英语有错误吗?帮我看看改改~The world seems disappeared when I stare at your eyes!
首先说说：gaze 与 stare 的词义细微差别.
gaze 表示“目不转睛地看”,并含有“惊叹”、或“羡慕”或“入迷”的意思：
The child gazed at the toys in the shop window.
stare 特别表示“睁大眼睛凝视”,并含有“惊奇”、或“傲慢”或“茫然”的意思
She stared him into silence.
她瞪了他一眼,他就不说话了.
stare作为名词时的几个词组：
look at sb.with a cold stare
冷冷地盯着某人
give sb.a rude stare
无礼地瞪某人一眼
楼主这个句子很美,但到底是 “睁大眼睛凝视”还是“目不转睛地看”呢?我觉得两者都可,好象gaze稍微好点.根据以上分析,请楼主自己定夺.无论选择哪个,亦或选择 look into,在语法上都正确,只是意思上稍有差别.
即使同样一句中国话里,也可以选择不同的词汇.关键看你自己想怎么表达.这不是问题的关键.语法才是关键.
其次 seem 的用法
seem to do sth
seem (to be) + adj
如果写成 seems disappeared,那就相当于 seems to be disappeared
如果把 disappeared 硬理解为形容词,但它毕竟是动词转化过来的而并非 纯粹的形容词,所以也是具有一定被动意义的.但这个句子里并无被动含义.而是世界自己主动消失.
另外,主句的时态,显然用 完成时态比较好.这样句子更美.看到对方眼睛的时候,世界已经消失,而不是要消失.所以,用完成时态.
建议如下改动：
The world seems to have disappeared when I stare at your eyes.
或者
It seems as if the world has disappeared when I gaze at your eyes.