谁能帮我改改英文个人简历我写了篇英文的简历去外企应聘,但用在线翻译发现很多问题,希望大家能帮我改改!I was born in December 25,1983.2003.9 - 2006.6 in Tianjin Institute of Occupational learning culture and t

谁能帮我改改英文个人简历我写了篇英文的简历去外企应聘,但用在线翻译发现很多问题,希望大家能帮我改改!I was born in December 25,1983.2003.9 - 2006.6 in Tianjin Institute of Occupational learning culture and t
谁能帮我改改英文个人简历
我写了篇英文的简历去外企应聘,但用在线翻译发现很多问题,希望大家能帮我改改!
I was born in December 25,1983.
2003.9 - 2006.6 in Tianjin Institute of Occupational learning culture and the arts,majoring in museology is on the professional,not only during this study and cultural knowledge,are fortunate to visit the major museums internship.In 2004.9 - 2005.3 in the opening of the Tianjin Museum of internship narrators,porcelain responsible for the Office of lectures,and received a lot of different levels of the audience,and people have good communication skills.
Work in a conscientious and responsible.Love sports,had participated in badminton and has won numerous awards competition
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谁能帮我改改英文个人简历我写了篇英文的简历去外企应聘,但用在线翻译发现很多问题,希望大家能帮我改改!I was born in December 25,1983.2003.9 - 2006.6 in Tianjin Institute of Occupational learning culture and t
2003.9 - 2006.6 I studied culture and arts in Tianjin Institute of Occupational.my major was museology.during this period.i obtained lots of knowledge,furthermore ,I fortunatelly had a opportunity to visit various major museums as a internship.In 2004.9 - 2005.3,the opening ceremony of the Tianjin Museum,I worked as a acting-narrators and responsible for the Official lectures.i introduced our Museum to different audiences and we had a good communication,I am a easy-going,self-confident person,working hard and own a highly responsibility on my job.i loved sports as well,i participated in badminton game when I was in the school.i won numerous awards in the competition.

born in 改为 on 具体到哪一天用on
2004.9-2005.3 可以改成，During 2004.9 to 2005.3
Work in a conscientious and responsible 改为 I will be conscientious with responsibility for my job 意思是我将真心实意，谨慎并且富有责任得做好我...

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born in 改为 on 具体到哪一天用on
2004.9-2005.3 可以改成，During 2004.9 to 2005.3
Work in a conscientious and responsible 改为 I will be conscientious with responsibility for my job 意思是我将真心实意，谨慎并且富有责任得做好我的工作
最后一句你的爱好是体育 改为， My hobby is sports .
曾参加羽毛球比赛拿过许多奖 改为， I had took part in badminton comoetition and won a medal .

award 作动词是授予某某奖，作名次是奖品的意思，所以在这里不适合。
中间有一句in the opening of the Tianjin Museum of internship narrators, porcelain responsible for the Office of lectures, and received a lot of different levels of the audience 我不理解这句话你要讲的意思，是不是说你在天津博物馆当实习讲述者，后面porcelain是瓷器的意思，这里怎么用？是不是负责演讲者的办公室？ 如果是，那就应该是 lecturers ,还有后面是不是想说收到很多观众来信，那levels是等级的意思，应该是letters 吧。如果你想说得到评价，那就是judge of audience
总的来说很多错误，自己再改改！希望我的回答对你有帮助

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