请大家帮我看看这篇英文作文里面有没有错误如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.I love him very

请大家帮我看看这篇英文作文里面有没有错误如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.I love him very
请大家帮我看看这篇英文作文里面有没有错误
如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正
Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he wroks very hard.No matter how difficult,he doesn't have to give up.So at the end of his seccess.He received the coveted championship ring.But now he suffered injuries.（这句话我想表达的意思是：但是现在,他却饱受伤病的困扰）He no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still support him just like in the past.Because I not only appreciate his game.I appreciate his attitude on everything,serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the attitude of my life.Of course,he is very handsome.But it's only a small part of all the reasonsfor i love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.

请大家帮我看看这篇英文作文里面有没有错误如题.有的话麻烦写一下应该如何改正Kevin Garnett id my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.I love him very
You did a venderful job,just with some little grammar problem.So let me try do some thing for you if you don't mind...
Kevin Garnett is my favourite basketball player.He is very handsome and sexy.He's from the US and plaied basketball for Celtics,Boston
I love him very much because he worked very hard.No matter how difficult,he never gave up.Till the end of his seccess,he got the coveted championship ring.But now he is suffered from injuries.He is no longer able to touch rebouds above.But I still cared about him just like before.Because I am not only appreciate his playing but also his attitude for everything like:serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me how to active during my life.Of course he is very attractive that's only part of all the reasons that I love him.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.

Kevin Garnett IS my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He IS （作文不应该用's) from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he WORKS very hard.No matter...

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Kevin Garnett IS my favourite man.He is very handsome and sexy.He IS （作文不应该用's) from the US.He is a basketball player from Boston Celtics.
I love him very much because he WORKS very hard.No matter how difficult IT IS, he DOES NOT give up.He WON the coveted championship ring, MARKING HIS SUCCESS.But now he IS SUFFERING FROM injuries.（这句话我想表达的意思是：但是现在，他却饱受伤病的困扰）He no longer able to touch rebouds above.（这句我不明白你想表达什么哦）But I still support him just like in the past.Because NOT ONLY DO I ADMIRE HIS TALENT, I ALSO ADMIRE his attitude. HE IS serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the POSITIVE attitude IN life.Of course,he is very handsome.But THAT IS ONLY ONE SMALL PART OF MY REASONS FOR LOVING HIM.
He is my favorite person.I will love him forever.

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试试看！你的文章句子很简单而且结构很单一，可以用一些复杂点的句子让文章更美。
Kevin Garnett is my favourite person who is handsome and sexy.He is a basketball player of Boston Celtics, USA.
I am totally fond of him because he wor...

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试试看！你的文章句子很简单而且结构很单一，可以用一些复杂点的句子让文章更美。
Kevin Garnett is my favourite person who is handsome and sexy.He is a basketball player of Boston Celtics, USA.
I am totally fond of him because he works very hard. And no matter how hard the difficulties are, he never gave up.As a result, he got the coveted championship ring. Unfortunetly, right now, he is suffering from the injuries.He no longer touch rebouds above, but I still support him just like in the past.Because not only I appreciate his games.but also for his attitudes towards everything, like serious,persistent and fearless.He taught me the attitude towards my life.There is no doubt that he is very handsome,but it's only a small part of the reasons I love him.
He is my favorite person and I will love him forever.

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