可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,是小演讲,Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough foo
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可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,是小演讲,Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough foo
可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,
是小演讲,
Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them.Let them live a better life.
可以帮我看看这篇英语小短文有语法问题吗,是小演讲,Hello,everyone.Today I want to talk about this picture.This is a photo of the black children.The black children may be the poorest children in the world They don't have enough foo
"They don't have enough food.They can't receive a good education.They don't have even clean water to drink.But lovely smiles still on thier faces.I hope there are more kind-heart people to care for them."
这几句放之间最好再加上一些连词之类的,不然衔接不畅,可以在they前面加入诸如and,then,and then之类的.
还有,注意一下标点断句.
Let them live a better life这一句前面可以加上so that,意为“以便...”,这样看起来或许会更好.
希望以上能帮到你.
我的英语向来很烂
receive a good education:education不可数 应去掉a
don't have even :应该改成don't even have
But lovely smiles still on thier faces:无谓语 应改为smiles are still
kind-heart :应该为kind-hearted
去网上找个英译汉词典核对一下...你就知道啦
They even don't have clean water to drink.
But lovely smiles is still on thier faces.