请作文水平不错的同学帮我点评一下这篇作文,马的怀想公园里,我看到了一匹马.这是一匹老马,毛色暗淡得似微弱的光,也并不光滑.两眼发出的凝重的光使人怜悯,似乎在哀求着什么.骨瘦如柴
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![请作文水平不错的同学帮我点评一下这篇作文,马的怀想公园里,我看到了一匹马.这是一匹老马,毛色暗淡得似微弱的光,也并不光滑.两眼发出的凝重的光使人怜悯,似乎在哀求着什么.骨瘦如柴](/uploads/image/z/4246769-65-9.jpg?t=%E8%AF%B7%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%E6%B0%B4%E5%B9%B3%E4%B8%8D%E9%94%99%E7%9A%84%E5%90%8C%E5%AD%A6%E5%B8%AE%E6%88%91%E7%82%B9%E8%AF%84%E4%B8%80%E4%B8%8B%E8%BF%99%E7%AF%87%E4%BD%9C%E6%96%87%2C%E9%A9%AC%E7%9A%84%E6%80%80%E6%83%B3%E5%85%AC%E5%9B%AD%E9%87%8C%2C%E6%88%91%E7%9C%8B%E5%88%B0%E4%BA%86%E4%B8%80%E5%8C%B9%E9%A9%AC.%E8%BF%99%E6%98%AF%E4%B8%80%E5%8C%B9%E8%80%81%E9%A9%AC%2C%E6%AF%9B%E8%89%B2%E6%9A%97%E6%B7%A1%E5%BE%97%E4%BC%BC%E5%BE%AE%E5%BC%B1%E7%9A%84%E5%85%89%2C%E4%B9%9F%E5%B9%B6%E4%B8%8D%E5%85%89%E6%BB%91.%E4%B8%A4%E7%9C%BC%E5%8F%91%E5%87%BA%E7%9A%84%E5%87%9D%E9%87%8D%E7%9A%84%E5%85%89%E4%BD%BF%E4%BA%BA%E6%80%9C%E6%82%AF%2C%E4%BC%BC%E4%B9%8E%E5%9C%A8%E5%93%80%E6%B1%82%E7%9D%80%E4%BB%80%E4%B9%88.%E9%AA%A8%E7%98%A6%E5%A6%82%E6%9F%B4)
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