求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.1.First of all,getting good education,people can obtain more opportunities in the future easily.It means people can obtain higher paying and respected careers with a good education.Professionals who make hig

求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.1.First of all,getting good education,people can obtain more opportunities in the future easily.It means people can obtain higher paying and respected careers with a good education.Professionals who make hig
求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.
1.First of all,getting good education,people can obtain more opportunities in the future easily.It means people can obtain higher paying and respected careers with a good education.Professionals who make high salaries are those who have excelled in their basic educational skills.Second,getting excellent education means they may have more relative knowledge and information in their major than those who didn't get it.Although there are several benefits to a good education,the main benefit is that it makes one a better person in all aspects of their life.They can serve well for our modern society.
2.While people are running toward one’s goals,they may meet with many obstacles in his life.I also have such experiments.2 years ago,my best object is going aboard to study Chinese.At that time,the economic condition was the biggest obstacle at me.Everybody knows that an overseas living need a large sum of money,however,my family couldn’t perfectly afford it.So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china.And,fortunately,I was selected from the many applications who hope to go to ㅁㅁ university in exchange.At last,I could be reached my goals

求改正我的英语作文的语法错误.1.First of all,getting good education,people can obtain more opportunities in the future easily.It means people can obtain higher paying and respected careers with a good education.Professionals who make hig
1 higher paying -high paid
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there are several benefits to a good education-to 改为for
2 condition was the biggest obstacle at me-at 改为for
So I hardly worked for my living expenses spending in china表意不清,我不知道你想表达什么意思

用英文写作需要做到八个字：
读英想英记英写英。
在写作过程中加入了中文思维，则出错的原因都非常难找的。不但自己难看出来，别人更难。因为别人要看的是作者的思路。用英文词句写出来的居然是中文，怎么摸清思路呢？
英汉混杂产生的语言叫做interlanguage，有四种出错的可能，目前最早提出这一概念的学者，Selinker，都搞不清楚错误是从哪里出来的。
如果用数学考虑一...

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用英文写作需要做到八个字：
读英想英记英写英。
在写作过程中加入了中文思维，则出错的原因都非常难找的。不但自己难看出来，别人更难。因为别人要看的是作者的思路。用英文词句写出来的居然是中文，怎么摸清思路呢？
英汉混杂产生的语言叫做interlanguage，有四种出错的可能，目前最早提出这一概念的学者，Selinker，都搞不清楚错误是从哪里出来的。
如果用数学考虑一下就比较容易理解了，用C表汉语，E表英语，则interlanguage来源于至少四个方面：
从E到C连接连接，也可能从C到E连接连接，方向不同，就是向量，不是标量，这就是两种可能！于是，有理由相信，引起E错误的可能是E，没记准，可能是C，没配对，可能是从E到C，中间没连接好，也可能是从C到E，还是中间没连接好，而且顺序不同，所以出来的非驴非马的东西就不知道叫什么啦！
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When running toward goals, people may meet with many obstacles in their life. I also have such experiences. 2 years ago, my objective is to go abroard to study Chinese. At that time, mone...

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第二篇可以改为：
When running toward goals, people may meet with many obstacles in their life. I also have such experiences. 2 years ago, my objective is to go abroard to study Chinese. At that time, money was the biggest obstacle for me. As it is known to all that living abroard needs a large sum of money.The same is true to me.But I almost earned all my living expenses in China. And more fortunately, I was selected from many applications who wished to go to ㅁㅁ university as exchange students. Finally,I realized my dream.

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