作业帮【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seei
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【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seei
【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法
One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seeing him.Ther are talking about the thief with a policewoman .Then they are all going to the bus station and catching the thief .The thief is crying.
看看有没有什么语法上的错误和用词不当.明天要交.9点之前.=W= 真的很着急
【急】看看这篇英语作文有没有什么错误?语法One day.Ben and Tim are seeing a thief in a supermarket.He is taking something now.Then he goes out the supermarket .He is reading newspaper and waiting for a bus .Then Ben and Tim are seei
最后那个be going to do不是doing.还有就是,你叙述的是发生过的是,整个时态都不对,用过去时
翻译：一天。本和蒂姆看到一个小偷在一家超市。他拿走的东西了。然后他走出超市。他正在看报纸,在等公共汽车。然后本和蒂姆是见到他。小区内设有谈论小偷一个女警察。然后他们全部都要去车站,抓住了小偷。这个小偷总是哭。
One day.Ben and Tim saw a thief in a supermarket. He was taking something then. Then he went out of the supermarket . He read a newspaper and waited for a bus . Then Ben and Tim saw him again. They reported the case to a policewoman. Then they all went to the bus station and caught the thief. The thief cried.
1. 首先see 是一个感官动词，不可以用于进行时态，所以第一句应该说Ben and Tim see a thief in a supermarket. 第五句应该是Ben and Tim see him.
2. reading a newspaper, 单数可数名词一般不可以单独使用的。
3.goes out of the supermarket, 从......出来应该加上of...
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1. 首先see 是一个感官动词，不可以用于进行时态，所以第一句应该说Ben and Tim see a thief in a supermarket. 第五句应该是Ben and Tim see him.
2. reading a newspaper, 单数可数名词一般不可以单独使用的。
3.goes out of the supermarket, 从......出来应该加上of。
4.另外即使老师不允许用过去时，你也应该用一般现在时写，偶尔可以夹杂现在进行时，完全用现在进行时是不对的。
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