作业帮请英语高手给我看看一简单英文信函Billy DAHU. about YIDN sample engines delivey time. JIM told me maybe in early June. if so, it is too late, now YIDN is pushing us the delivery time. they want to HDHDH supply the sample engines in mid
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请英语高手给我看看一简单英文信函Billy DAHU. about YIDN sample engines delivey time. JIM told me maybe in early June. if so, it is too late, now YIDN is pushing us the delivery time. they want to HDHDH supply the sample engines in mid
请英语高手给我看看一简单英文信函
Billy DAHU. about YIDN sample engines delivey time. JIM told me maybe in early June. if so, it is too late, now YIDN is pushing us the delivery time. they want to
HDHDH supply the sample engines in mid May. kindly you can confirm that, if HDHDH can short the delivery time?. i will looking forward to your information, thank you very much.
请您指教看看那里不对,还是口气不好.万分的感谢.因为这信我要被老板开除了
请英语高手给我看看一简单英文信函Billy DAHU. about YIDN sample engines delivey time. JIM told me maybe in early June. if so, it is too late, now YIDN is pushing us the delivery time. they want to HDHDH supply the sample engines in mid
格式不对,语法不对,有的词写得不对,语气也不对.if HDHDH can short the .
short要改为shorten delivey写错了.每个句子第一个词要首字母大写.
i（我）要大写,they want to HDHDH supply the sample engines in mid May 语法不对可改为they want HDHDH to supply the sample engines in mid May.还有很多.
礼貌用语一个也没有出现.
感觉就像是goole翻译软件翻译出来的一样,怎么不开除?
称呼是不是用Dear Mr.(或者Ms.)好一点。