帮忙改英语句子 有赏 是读起来怪怪的句子（不改变句意）要改句子：I like summer because summer means passion.In summer,the sun makes our sweat and suffering,and it allows us to struggle.It is what others say is hot,but it is

帮忙改英语句子 有赏 是读起来怪怪的句子（不改变句意）要改句子：I like summer because summer means passion.In summer,the sun makes our sweat and suffering,and it allows us to struggle.It is what others say is hot,but it is
帮忙改英语句子 有赏 是读起来怪怪的句子（不改变句意）
要改句子：
I like summer because summer means passion.
In summer,the sun makes our sweat and suffering,and it
allows us to struggle.
It is what others say is hot,but it is not only the hot
weather and have a hot heart.

帮忙改英语句子 有赏 是读起来怪怪的句子（不改变句意）要改句子：I like summer because summer means passion.In summer,the sun makes our sweat and suffering,and it allows us to struggle.It is what others say is hot,but it is
Summer stands for passion,
that’s why I like it.
The sun always makes us
sweat,we suffer a lot but it also encourage us to struggle for life.
Others consider summer
as a hot weather ,but summer hides a enthusiastic heart as far as I’m concerned

I like summer because summer means passion.In summer,the sun makes us sweat,sufferand struggle.Others say it's hot, but there is not only the hot weather but also a hot heart.

1、means 改为 stands for
2、our 改为us
3、and 改为 but also
希望有所帮助。

I like summer because means passion.
in summer,the sun makes us sweat and sufferand,and it allows us to struggle.
Though otherts say is hot,it is not only the hot weather anf have a hot heart.

I like summer, because summer means passion. In the summer, the sun makes our sweat outflow, and it allows us to struggle. This is the other people say is hot, but it is not only the hot weather, have a hot heart.

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为你修改如下，请详阅：
【I like summer for that summer represents passion. In summer, the sun gives us sweat and suffering as a gift ,which allows us to struggle for ourselves freely. It is others who complai...

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为你修改如下，请详阅：
【I like summer for that summer represents passion. In summer, the sun gives us sweat and suffering as a gift ,which allows us to struggle for ourselves freely. It is others who complain the hot weather, however, there is not only hot weather but also a hot heart.】
我热爱夏天因为它代表激情，在夏天，太阳赠予我们汗水和苦痛，它让我们能够为自己而奋斗！别人都说天气热，殊不知热的不只是天气，还有我们的火热的内心！
希望帮助到你！

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l like passion as well as l like summer.
第一句稍微改了，把夏天和热情并列放置，说明你两者都喜欢
In summer, the sun makes us sweat, suffer and sturggle.
里面把“our"改成"us"因为是宾语；同时把三个动词放在一起，用同一个时态
Others say summer is...

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l like passion as well as l like summer.
第一句稍微改了，把夏天和热情并列放置，说明你两者都喜欢
In summer, the sun makes us sweat, suffer and sturggle.
里面把“our"改成"us"因为是宾语；同时把三个动词放在一起，用同一个时态
Others say summer is hot, while l think summer contains a hot heart as well.
这里的but完全没有必要，因为你说人家认为夏天很热
而同时你觉得不仅仅是热，还有一个炽热的心。
也就是说你赞同人家的一个说法，所以不需要用but当转折
我用while来连接句子，顺便当了个递进的意思。

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I like summer because it is full of passion. In that season,the sun is so strong that we have to struggle, it makes us sweat and suffering. And that is called hot by people.Not only because it means the hot weather but also a hot heart.

强悍的娃，你好像很无聊！！！！！！1

改后：I like summer because summer means passion.In summer,the sun makes us sweat,sufferand struggle.Others say it's hot, but there is only a hot heart in a hot weather.