有没有语法错误呢》Reading Report on Harry Potter I watched a lot of English movies in this summer vacation.Such as:‘Transformers’,‘Harry Potter’,’Twilight’ ,‘The Devil Wears Prada’and so on.My favorites are Harry Potter serie

有没有语法错误呢》Reading Report on Harry Potter I watched a lot of English movies in this summer vacation.Such as:‘Transformers’,‘Harry Potter’,’Twilight’ ,‘The Devil Wears Prada’and so on.My favorites are Harry Potter serie
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Reading Report on Harry Potter
I watched a lot of English movies in this summer vacation.Such as:‘Transformers’,‘Harry Potter’,’Twilight’ ,‘The Devil Wears Prada’and so on.My favorites are Harry Potter series movies.
I’d like to talk about some roles .First ,Harry Potter is one of the leadering role.He is a brave boy.He can fight with Voldemort alone when he was 11 years old.And He won!Voldemort is the stronggest black evil wizard.What a brave boy he is!
Hermione Granger is a smart girl,she knows everythings.She is one of Harry’s good friend,She often helps Harry and Ron .She is also confident.When her friend are in danger,she can save them at any moment.Because she is calm.She is a fantastic witch,isn’t she?
At last ,let’s talk about Harry’s best friend,Ron Weasley.He is not smart,he is not strong ,he is not handsome,he is not a rich.But I think he is a really virtuous boy.He supports Harry at any time.He is the bravest role in this movie.
Bravery,cleverness,calm,honest,confidence…That are what I learned from them.

有没有语法错误呢》Reading Report on Harry Potter I watched a lot of English movies in this summer vacation.Such as:‘Transformers’,‘Harry Potter’,’Twilight’ ,‘The Devil Wears Prada’and so on.My favorites are Harry Potter serie
My favorites are Harry Potter series movies.
这句可以改为Which left me a great expression is...
leadering role ——leading roles
everythings去s
when her friend 加s（粗心额）
what I learned ——what I have learned
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