请英文好的朋友帮助修改以下作文,关于香港迪士尼的Chinese generally don't express their feelings very well in Chinese culture context.So Disney had to make flexible labor practices which fit local cultures.Now there is multiple la

请英文好的朋友帮助修改以下作文,关于香港迪士尼的Chinese generally don't express their feelings very well in Chinese culture context.So Disney had to make flexible labor practices which fit local cultures.Now there is multiple la
请英文好的朋友帮助修改以下作文,关于香港迪士尼的
Chinese generally don't express their feelings very well in Chinese culture context.So Disney had to make flexible labor practices which fit local cultures.Now there is multiple languages are spoken by the staff in Hong Kong Disney include:English,Cantonese,and Mandarin.
In the beginning,Disney in Hong Kong exist many labor practices problems.McPhail point out the most popular problems which the staff always complain include:short lunch breaks,long hours,and an insufficient number of staff.As a result,Disney had to set up a union called the Hong Kong Disney Cast Members to solve this kind of problem.

请英文好的朋友帮助修改以下作文,关于香港迪士尼的Chinese generally don't express their feelings very well in Chinese culture context.So Disney had to make flexible labor practices which fit local cultures.Now there is multiple la
ThecChinese generally don't express their feelings very well in the Chinese culture.So,Disney had to make flexible labor practices which fit local cultures.Now multiple languages are spoken by the staff in Hong Kong Disney,which include English,Cantonese,and Mandarin.
In the beginning,there were many labor practices problems in Hong Kong Disney.McPhail point outs that the most popular problems are what the staff always complain with,which include:short lunch breaks,long wotking hours,and an insufficient number of staff.As a result,Disney had to set up a union called the Hong Kong Disney Cast Members to solve this kind of problem.

Grammar 很多错误呀！有些地方也不知道说什么，可以给你中文意思出来再修改吗？
第一句不明白想说什么。 第一句用现在式，为什么第二句用过去式“had to"?
there is 之后又众数，不对
。。。hk Disney include - 这样等于一句两动词，错，可改为including
Disney 是第三身单数，若现在式，应该是exists 呀之后McPh...

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Grammar 很多错误呀！有些地方也不知道说什么，可以给你中文意思出来再修改吗？
第一句不明白想说什么。 第一句用现在式，为什么第二句用过去式“had to"?
there is 之后又众数，不对
。。。hk Disney include - 这样等于一句两动词，错，可改为including
Disney 是第三身单数，若现在式，应该是exists 呀之后McPhail那句错误相同。但在修改前，应先考虑你第二段是什么时态，”In the beginning" 即是说以前开始时，那应该是过去式呀。

这段文章存在很多时态的Grammar 问题

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