作业帮My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big,but is very tidy.There is a window in the wall.There is a bed near the window.The bed is black and white.I often sleep in it everynight.There is a board behind a blue desk.And there is a li
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My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big,but is very tidy.There is a window in the wall.There is a bed near the window.The bed is black and white.I often sleep in it everynight.There is a board behind a blue desk.And there is a li
My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big,but is very tidy.There is a windo
w in the wall.There is a bed near the window.The bed is black and white.I often sleep in it everynight.There is a board behind a blue desk.And there is a light in my bedroom.The light is brighter.Although my bedroom is not very beautiful,but I also like it very much.
Do you like my bedroom?What about yours?
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My bedroom Look!This is my bedroom.My bedroom isn't very big,but is very tidy.There is a window in the wall.There is a bed near the window.The bed is black and white.I often sleep in it everynight.There is a board behind a blue desk.And there is a li
1.去掉every night,因为前面已有了频度副词：often
2.去掉Although,或but,两者不能同时用
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我的卧室
这是我的卧室 我的卧室不大但很整洁 在墙上有一个窗户 窗户附近有一张床 床是黑白色的 我经常晚上睡在上面 在蓝桌子后有一个板子 在卧室有一盏灯 灯很明亮 虽然我的卧室不漂亮 但是我很喜欢它 你喜欢我的卧室吗 你的怎么样？
but it is very tidy
I often sleep on it at...
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我的卧室
这是我的卧室 我的卧室不大但很整洁 在墙上有一个窗户 窗户附近有一张床 床是黑白色的 我经常晚上睡在上面 在蓝桌子后有一个板子 在卧室有一盏灯 灯很明亮 虽然我的卧室不漂亮 但是我很喜欢它 你喜欢我的卧室吗 你的怎么样？
but it is very tidy
I often sleep on it at night
although 和but 去掉一个
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